-2 How is Hati attempting to approach Xephyris? Aside from mentioning that he sprang forward you made no clear mention of an approach or the positioning intended.
-1 “...his right canine tooth aimed for Xephyris' right eye...” Upper or lower right canine?
10 for powerplaying.
None seen!
10 for defenses.
+1 for each seen to max of 10.
10 for attack.
+2 for shoulder throw
+1 for severity
+1 for stomp
+1 for severity
+3 for bite
+1 for grip
+1 for severity
10 for injuries.
First round.
Hati's round one total: 47/50
XEPHYRIS: 10 for clarity:
All clear!
10 for powerplaying.
None seen!
10 for defenses.
+1 for each seen to max of 10.
6 for attack.
+3 for bite
+1 for stomp
+2 for shoulder throw
10 for injuries.
Fractured toes
Moderate punctures wounds to scruff
Xephyris' round one total: 46/50
ROUND TWO
HATI: 10 for clarity:
All clear!
9 for powerplaying.
-1 “...ignoring the dull pain as Xephyris drove into the right front part of Hati's chest...” Xephyris was aiming for the left side of Hati's chest
10 for defenses.
+1 for each seen to max of 10.
7 for attack.
+2 for shoulder throw
+3 for bite
+1 for severity
+1 for stomp
7 for injuries.
-2 for moderate lacerations to shoulder
-1 for moderate bruising to chest
Hati's round two total: 43/50
XEPHYRIS: 7 for clarity:
-1 “...leaving his left forepaw raised off the ground.” When did he pull it out from under Hati's paw?
-1 “He sought to drive the upper, bony part of his shoulder blade...” Which shoulder?
-1 Given their positioning I'm not sure how exactly Xeph's right hind paw can reach Hati's right forepaw.
9 for powerplaying.
-1 “...Xephyris would launch himself in Hati's direction...” This should have been attempted
10 for defenses.
+1 for each seen to max of 10.
6 for attack.
+2 for shoulder throw
+3 for bite
+1 for stomp
6 for injuries.
-1 for strained jaw
- 3 for severe lacerations to shoulder
Xephyris' round two total: 38/50
Totals:
HATI: 90/100 XEPHYRIS: 84/100
And the winner is...
HATI! Xephyris must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out.
Damage:
By now it's all healed!
Notes:
Tips for writing and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here):
For both: I am so, so very sorry this has taken me so long to judge! It was a good fight, guys! You both did very well and I don't have anything to note besides how sorry I am it took me so long. I truly am sorry!!
