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09-30-2013, 02:01 PM
ARDHEL v MORGANA for PRACTICE Round 1
Morgana: 10 for clarity- clear post 10 for powerplaying- none 0 for defenses- alright, so here you received zero points because there were no defenses in this post. on alacritis, we judge on how many you have written in your post and how your character uses them to protect them self. you need at least five or single defenses in every single fight post. 6 for attack- running at ardhel, aiming to ram in her left side, and if that were to succeed she would twist to her right and aim for her muzzle. To get a full ten, you need two to three different attacks, each one could be either in steps, or can be different scenarios based on how your character would think its opponent would react. Also, in your attacks you need to add what your character is going to do with their attack if it succeeds. For example, was morgana going to release(trying to tear flesh) and go for another attack, or was she aiming to hold the muzzle and crunch down the best she could? 0 for injuries-First round Round one morgana Total: 26/50 ardhel: 8 for clarity- make sure you read your post before you write it, and also your wording was a little confusing to follow. make sure it is all crystal clear. 5 for powerplaying- explained in the cbox, like I said, everything must be an attempt, and when your opponent's attack succeeds, your character must counter around that. for example, maybe she could have swiped at morgana's face while morgana was biting her muzzle to try to push her away. 0 for defenses- at the bottom of your post you listen a defense, but in your actual post there was nothing regarding it. remember, if it is not in your post, it does not happen. also, to get a full ten, we look for at least five to six defenses in every fight post. the defenses help protect your character from your opponents attacks. 4 for attack- jumps at morgana, hoping to knock her off balance. To get a full ten, you need two to three different attacks, each one could be either in steps, or can be different scenarios based on how your character would think its opponent would react 0 for injuries- First round Round one ardhel Total: 17/50 Round 2
morgana: 9 for clarity- pretty clear, but toward the middle your wording got confusing. make sure you make it crystal clear 10 for powerplaying- none 1 for defenses- in your post you put that her lips were curled. that could be considered a defense, since her teeth are bared and she is ready to protect herself. 5 for attack- trying to bash her head into arhdel's then is going for the top part of her muzzle again, intends to get a hold of it. 10 for injuries- no injuries yet Round two morgana Total: 35/50 ardhel: 8 for clarity- again, watch your wording. 10 for powerplaying. none 0 for defenses. again, no defenses were written into your post. make sure they or they do not count 7 for attack. steps into the headbutt, then tries to swipe at morgana's throat. At the bottom you said she wanted to "cut main arteries" wolf's claws are not sharp, they can barley break skin and that is if they get lucky. 10 for injuries. hazed and has deeper tears in muzzle from morgana's fangs Round two ardhel Total: 35/50 Round 3
morgana: 8 for clarity- your wording was a bit hard to keep up with toward the middle, using a lot of sentences as opposed to one long one is always better to do. 10 for powerplaying. none 0 for defenses. no defenses stated in this post 10 for attack. Trying to force their heads down while also trying to bash her head into the ground. 0 for injuries. she took no damage from the paw swipe, and she should have at least got scratched. wolf claws are not sharp enough to easily break skin, but they can cause pain and scrapes. even if she were to move the swipe would have hit her somewhere on her body, not completely miss. don't be afraid to let your wolf take damage, we actually judge on how accurate the damage is, not how much they have. Round three morgana Total: 28/50 ardhel: 10 for clarity- clear 10 for powerplaying. none 0 for defenses. still no defenses listed. 5 for attack. tries to claw at morgana's muzzle. one more attack would have been beneficial 10 for injuries. bruised head, bad bites on muzzle Round three ardhel Total: 35/50 morgana: 89/150 ardhel: 87/150 And the winner is...
morgana! ardhel must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
morgana- bruising on forehead, three OOC days to heal. ardhel- deep bites to muzzle, will take one OOC week to heal. Possible scarring, nothing severe. Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Notes for you BOTH: Usually we give separate notes for each person, but since you are both new to the fighting style on alacritis, I will tell you both the same thing. first, you must always write a crystal clear post. if the judge cant understand it perfectly, points are being docked. as for powerplaying, you must always make an attempt when making an attack. also, when your opponents attack hits always work your next attack around theirs. for defenses, always have about five or six in every single fight post you do. you can repeat them, but always have them. without them your character is defenseless and cannot realistically protect themselves from any attacks. for your attack, you should have two to three minimum attacks. they can either be in steps, or they can be different scenarios in regards to your opponents possible reactions. for injuries, don't be afraid to let your wolf take damage. we judge based on how realistic the damage is, not how much they have. remember these things and your next fight score will be much higher. if either of you have questions feel free to ask me on skype<3 - By [aislyn]
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