Tighten Your Grip

*Raisa* · 02-12-2014, 06:20 PM

The male's presence was brought to the queen on the wind, and her mood seemed unsure whether to sour or not. True, she was here to seek out followers and pack members, but it was hard to be joyful and convincing on a day like this. She sighed, letting all the air from her lungs, and turned to seek out the stranger. She saw him quickly against the barren, sulfurous background, noting immediately his odd coloring. He stood quite a few yards away and she felt no immediate danger, so she raised a brow. "What, no introduction?" She took a breath to make a jab at his manners, but restrained herself at the last moment. Pissing others off, she'd come to realize, was not a great way to earn their trust or sympathy. She was not over eager to engage the man in conversation, because gods only knew what might come negatively of it. If it was any consolation, she knew her companions were on their way to meet her, and may even be within hearing distance of a howl. She was no longer alone, with naught but a small fox for company. She had resources, and allies. If she had her way, of course, this male would become one of them. Granted, it would likely behoove her to learn something of him first. She waited for him to speak.

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OOC: Preliminary comments! Just a few things I noticed that, while reading, didn't really flow. How he said the cold resembles whats inside him might be laying it on a little thick :P Maybe try experimenting with other more subtle ways to the let the reader know he's not a great guy. He scoffed, he glared, he shook himself from dark thoughts, he wondered what her guts might look like strewn across the ground, things like that!

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Tighten Your Grip

Raisa