Sashimi on the Rocks
04-11-2014, 02:37 PM
Daegmar v Raisa for Spar Round 1
Raisa: 6 for clarity- Lack of detail on attacks eg- where was she trying to claw? . 10 for powerplaying. 8 for defenses. +1 for each stated. 4 for attack. 10 for injuries.First round Round one Raisa's Total: 38/50 Daegmar: 8 for clarity- 10 for powerplaying. None seen 10 for defenses. Full pints given 4 for attack. bite to front leg/ribcage 8 for injuries.First round Round one Daegmar's Total: 40/50 Round 2
Raisa: 5 for clarity- Lack of detail within movement, minor confusion. 10 for powerplaying. None found 10 for defenses. full points! 6 for attack.Multiple attacks given 8 for injuries. minor injuries Round two Raisa's Total: 39/50 Daegmar: 8 for clarity- -2 which side did she attempt to slam Raisa? 10 for powerplaying. None found. 6 for defenses. +1 for each i saw. 5 for attack. trying to worsen hold- extra point. 8 for injuries. Minor Round two Daegmar's Total: 37/50 Round 3
Raisa: 7 for clarity- Minor mistakes, little confusion. 10 for powerplaying. None detected. 7 for defenses. Notes 7 for attack. +3 for bite +1 for attempting to worsen previous attack +3 for attempting to control wolf into a pin 7 for injuries. Round three Raisa Total: 38/50 Daegmar: 8 for clarity- minor mistakes 10 for powerplaying. none found. 6 for defenses. +1 for each 4 for attack. Violant attack at Raisas thigh 8 for injuries. minor Round three Daegmar Total: 36/50 Totals:
Raisa: 115/150 Daegmar: 113/150 And the winner is...
Raisa! Daegmar must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
Raisa- Wound on leg will take 2 ooc weeks to heal, bruising will heal after a matter of days. Daegmar- Bruising will heal after a matter of days, Scruff will take 2 ooc days to heal, minor wounds will take 1 ooc week to heal. Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Notes For Fox You would have done better with clarity, try adding more complex attacks and try thinking about more simple movements, at times i thought she had a bit to much movement! You did really well overall For Lunarcat7 I thought you did really well in this fight! I i have nothing to note, you where close overall - By [Luisiana]
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Edited! Error on judging, fixed. Sorry about that guys!