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05-27-2014, 07:44 AM
Natalya v Arwel for training Round 1
Natalya: 9 for clarity- Mostly clear 6 for powerplaying. -2 ?moved forward to close most of the distance.? You cant assume that she close some of the distance, you must put an attempt in or its powerplay. -2 ?she backed straight away from him.? You need an attempt, you cant assume that she was successful with making the distance. 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 6 for attack. +2 for shove +3 for attempted bite +1 for trying to worsen with pulling upwards 10 for injuries.First round Round one Natalya Total: 41/50 Arwel: 5 for clarity- -2 ?aiming to slide along her side.? This isn?t very specific and there isn?t much to go of for the opponent to work with. -3 ? teeth across her side.? Where abouts? Theres lots of places on the side to choose from, nearer her leg or rump? How would he move his head to get a better angle? 8 for powerplaying. -2 ? just a bit more distance between his back end and the woman?s front.? You need an attempt! 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 6 for attack. +3 for trying to bite to side -1 for lack of clarity. +2 for for trying to damage her paw. +2 teeth to flank 10 for injuries.First round Round one Arwel Total: 39/50 Round 2
Natalya: 6 for clarity- -2 which part of her side did Arwel get?. -2 for minor errors that where confusing in how her movements where made. 8 for powerplaying. -2 ?twisted the upper half of her body to reach him.? 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 7 for attack. +3 for bite to armpit +2 for leg sweep +2 for shove 4 for injuries. -2 for bruising on foot. ? 2 for moderate tearing to side -2 for slight tear to right shoulder. Round two Natalya Total: 35/50 Arwel: 6 for clarity- -2 ?tearing the flesh on her side for moderate damage she twisted her upper half.? How moderate? How successful was that to him? Did he position his head which made it more successful? -2 ? good hold on natalya?s scruff.? Where abouts on the scruff? 10 for powerplaying. none seen 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 6 for attack. +3 for trying to bite down and hold scruff. +1 for shaking to worsen +2 for sweep to leg to try to unbalance her 6 for injuries. -2 for tearing under the armpit. -2 for tearing to scruff Round two Arwel Total: 38/50 Totals:
Natalya: 76/100 Arwel:77/100 And the winner is...
Arwel! Natalya must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
Natalya Arwel- Moderate wounds will take 2 ooc weeks to heal. Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Notes For Raii Good fight! Though keep in mind Natalya is blind and she wont always be so accurate on position. I deducted no points for this. For Arwel This was a really good fight on your part! Make sure to use more attacks in your posts to gain you more points! - By [Luisiana]
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