Minute in a heartbeat
05-06-2014, 12:02 PM
Ortzi v Liberty for Overseer Round 1
Ortzi: 9 for clarity- Very minor grammatical issues -1 10 for powerplaying. Notes 7 for defenses. 7, +1 each 7 for attack. +2 shove, +3 bite, +2 leg swipe 10 for injuries.First round Round one Ortzi Total: 43/50 Liberty: 8 for clarity- switched tenses, spelling, etc. 10 for powerplaying. Notes 10 for defenses. +1 each 5 for attack. +3 bite to cheek & eyebrow, +2 slam weight into left side, no points for third attack because it depends entirely upon Etern?s response and therefore will not be counted. 10 for injuries.First round Round one Liberty Total: 43/50 Round 2
Ortzi: 9 for clarity- Very few issues 10 for powerplaying. Notes 6 for defenses. +1 each 7 for attack. +2 shoulder move, +3 bite, +2 push her over 4 for injuries. -6 two bite wounds Round two Ortzi Total: 36/50 Liberty: 9 for clarity- Notes 10 for powerplaying. Notes 10 for defenses. Notes 7 for attack. +3 bite, +3 bite, +1 leg shove 5 for injuries. -2 bruised jaw, -3 bite wound Round two Liberty Total: 41/50 Totals:
Ortzi: 79/100 Liberty: 84/100 And the winner is...
Liberty! Ortzi must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
Ortzi- All injuries will heal in approximately 1 ooc week. Liberty- All injuries will heal in approximately 1 ooc week. Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) You guys, I?ll say this once and hopefully will never have to say it again. Please please refrain from underlining ?attempt? and other similar words in your posts ? it?s incredibly insulting to judges and only serves to tick us off. Other than that, really great fight. - By [Andy]
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