seven year summer
06-18-2014, 12:07 PM
Nephele v Bass for Spar Round 1
Bass: 6 for clarity- -4 I had trouble understanding were Bass was 2 for powerplaying. -2 ?he feigned to the left before propelling his body to the left? need to attempt to do this. -2 ?as he brushed passed her, quickly spinning his body so that his tail was well out of reach from her own ivories? also needed an attempt. -2 ?His head now stood level with her shoulder? also needed to attempt this, anticipate movement. -2 ?Landing on the ground and well prepared for the landin? too much movement/doesn't give enough time for a response/don't assume that he would be able to do this gien nephele hasn't responded to the attack yet 3 for defenses. +1 for each seen 3 for attack. +1 for graze +2 for leap and attempted knock over 10 for injuries.First round Round one Bass Total: 24/50 Nephele: 8 for clarity- -2 not quite sure where she ended up after the attack 10 for powerplaying. none seen 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 6 for attack. +3 for ram +3 for bite to the tail 10 for injuries.First round Round one Nephele Total: 44/50 Round 2
Bass: 9 for clarity- Mostly clear 8 for powerplaying. -2 ?Tucking his injured tail away from her grasp? you can?t assume his tail was released 6 for defenses. +1 for each seen 5 for attack. +3 for bite +2 for foreleg to the spine 4 for injuries. -3 for tail bite -1 for bruising Round two Bass Total: 32/50 Nephele: 9 for clarity- Mostly clear 10 for powerplaying. none seen 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 5 for attack. +3 for bite to lower thigh +2 for swipe to the thigh 6 for injuries. -1 shallow cuts -2 bruising -3 bite to hip Round two Nephele Total: 40/50 Round 3
Bass: 9 for clarity- Mostly clear 10 for powerplaying. none seen 5 for defenses. +1 for each seen 4 for attack. +4 bite to the neck and hold 6 for injuries. -3 for bite to the leg Round two Bass Total: 24/50 Nephele: 9 for clarity- Mostly clear 10 for powerplaying. None seen 5 for defenses. +1 for each seen 6 for attack. +2 shaking leg for damage +3 for attempted bite +1 for slam to back paw 6 for injuries. -3 bite to back of neck Round two Nephele Total: 36/50 Totals:
Bass: 80/150 Nephele:120/150 And the winner is...
Nephele! Bass must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
Bass - Bite to tail, which will scar permanently, and bite to leg will take 2 ooc weeks to heal, bruising will take a few IC days Nephele - Bite to the hip and neck that will take 2 ooc weeks to heal, bruising will take a few IC days Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Notes For Eve You did great portraying a wolf who is an inexperienced fighter, defiantly watch out for too much movement as in your first post. Other then that I look forward to watching him learn to fight! For Cantti Neph goes for the low blows lol. It was a good fight! Only suggestion would be to maybe expand a bit more on your attacks, great clarity though! - By [Dione]
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