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06-29-2014, 10:52 AM
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Frustration filtered through the woman as she had missed the forechest of the woman. This caused her to nearly loose footing, but she still managed to grab a chunk of skin from her opponent and ram her shoulder forward until it collided with the other girl's. Just from the back, which wasn't as fragile as the neck was. Eyes narrowing, Wren curled her lips back to reveal her ivories yet again, paws fighting to balance herself out again. But as she tried to continue to fix and adjust her defenses, Desiree had gotten ahold of her own neck, causing a pained puff of air to shoot out of her slightly agape maw. But despite the amount of pain vibrating from her neck, the woman continued to pull down on the chunk of flesh from the back of her opponent. Until soon she felt the girl let go of her neck and move her head down. Thinking she'd aim for her fragile ankles, Wren whipped her head around, attempting to lift the paw the woman was aiming for as far upward as she could.
If the woman were to avoid getting a pair of jaws around her ankle, she'd aim to throw her claws down onto the lowered face of the woman. Because she wasn't paying much attention to where she sent her claws- they could of likely landed in the eyes of the girl, the muzzle, or the skull. She might of just missed, as well. Wren, hoping to still have her right paw flattened onto the head of the woman, swung her tall frame around to the left[this being she would have removed her paw] and aimed her jaws down at the scruff of the purple queen. Then, attempting to snap her jaws around the flesh, she would try an yank her to the side. This, if successful, could knock her over or cause damage to her neck. Wren, while hopefully completing all that she tried, continued to narrow her eyes and distribute weight to each of her paws to keep balance. Chin slightly but not completely tucked, and tail curled protectively through her hind legs. "Speech"

WREN v DESIREE
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DEFENSES attempting to keep her balance distributed to each paw in order to avoid falling or tripping to easily, ears flattened back against her skull, chin slightly but not completely tucked, legs widened, tail tucked between her back legs(to make sure des doesn't grab it), eyes narrowed, teeth bared ((she's struggling to keep all her defenses set while fighting))
ATTACKS when des had lowered her head to grab hold of wren's ankle/lower foreleg, she had noticed quickly and had lifted her paw, but had attempted to immediately shoot it back down onto des's face(most likely on the muzzle/nose). then, if her paw was still planted upon des's face, she'd remove it and swing her body around, aiming to grab hold of her scruff and yank her in toward her violently.
INJURIES major bite wound located on upper neck, minor bruising on left shoulder
NOTES phew, so much movement xD again, tell me if there is anything confusing