No Mediocre
07-18-2014, 11:55 PM
MISHA v ATLAS for SPAR Round 1
MISHA: 7 for clarity- is she running at him head on, or at an angle, be sure to specify. which side of her body is she trying to slam against him, what side of his body is she trying to slam against? Which way is her head twisting to grab his leg? 8 for powerplaying. ?she would wrap her jaws around his left foreleg? you are assuming shes able to grab his leg. ?twisting her head? again you are assuming she successfully grabbed his leg. 4 for defenses. you need to mention all your defenses in all your posts for them to count. Eyes narrowed +1, ears pinned +1, legs bent and weight evenly distributed +2. 4 for attack. using her weight to slam into him +2, bite aimed at his upper leg +2 10 for injuries.First round Round one MISHA Total: 33/50 ATLAS: 7 for clarity- Which part of her body is he attempting to slam into? Where on her back is his leg trying to land? What part of her spine is he trying to bite? 9 for powerplaying. you are assuming Misha is attacking from the left rather than discussing it with Misha. 9 for defenses. eyes narrowed, chin tucked, head tilted down, toes splayed, claws digging into ground, tail aligned with spine, shoulders rolled, hackles lifted, legs spread evenly 7 for attack. +2 for using his weight, +3 for attempted bite to the spine, +2 for using legs to attempt and grab her. 10 for injuries.First round Round one ATLAS Total: 42/50 Round 2
MISHA: 7 for clarity- what part of his chest is her body slamming against? What part of the side of her body is colliding with him? What injuries have you obtained throughout the spar? 8 for powerplaying. misha is much smaller and would be unable to rise up beneath Atlas. 0 for defenses. you must list your defenses in each post for them to count. 0 for attack. twisting/turning/thrashing isn?t an attack 8 for injuries. bite/tear injury to her scruff, bruising from their collision Round two MISHA Total: 23/50 ATLAS: 9 for clarity- are his legs still wrapped around her? 10 for powerplaying.none seen 6 for defenses. ears pinned, toes splayed, claws digging into ground, abdomen tense, shoulders rolled forward, hackles raised 4 for attack. aimed bite at the back of her shoulder blades, pushing his weight forward 9 for injuries. bruising to his chest Round two ATLAS Total: 38/50 Round 3
MISHA: 7 for clarity- no clarification of injuries. Watch out for grammar errors. Which way is she twisting her neck? 8 for powerplaying. you are assuming her jaws will get close to Atlas?s face. She couldn?t possibly hold Atlas up for so long. 6 for defenses. weight distributed on both hind legs, claws digging into the ground, tail aligned with spine, hackles raised, eyes narrowed, ears pinned 2 for attack. attempted bite to his cheek 6 for injuries. bite and tearing of her scruff, bruising from their collision Round three MISHA Total: 29/50 ATLAS: 9 for clarity- Which part of her throat is he aiming for? 10 for powerplaying. None seen 7 for defenses. eyes narrowed, ears pinned, hackles raised, toes splayed, , abdomen tense, claws digging into ground, shoulders rolled forward 5 for attack. attempted grab at her throat, using his weight 8 for injuries. bruising to his chest, minor scraping to the life side of his neck Round three ATLAS Total: 39/50 Totals:
MISHA: 85/150 ATLAS: 119/150 And the winner is...
Atas! Misha must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
MISHA- Bruising to the collision site on her body, will heal in 5 ooc days. Bite and tearing to her scruff, will heal in 7 occ days, and will scar. ATLAS- Bruising to chest will heal in 5 ooc days, minro scrapes on left side of neck, will heal in 3 ooc days. Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Notes For Misha Watch out for powerplaying issues, your attacks must be realistic. Also be sure to include defenses in every post, as well as more complex attacks. You need to focus on clarity, the position of your wolf, where exactly you are attacking as well as listing an injuries you obtain. For Atlas Your posts were pretty clear, but watch out for powerplaying a bit and focus on more complex attacks. - By [saffie]
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