HEAR ME ROAR
08-15-2014, 12:11 PM
Nephele v Galahad for Spar Round 1
Nephele: 9 for clarity- Mostly clear! 6 for powerplaying. [-2] you assumed she was successful with closing the distance. [-2] 'it would be hard for him to see down there' thats for him to decide and not you. 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 7 for attack. +2 for barge +2 doe trying to unbalance him +3 for attempting to bite 10 for injuries.First round Round one Nephele Total: 42/50 Galahad: 3 for clarity- [-3] how did she hit the shoulder? the size difference would make it fairly hard to do so. [-2] ' to face her a bit more directly,' how directly? [-2] how did he attempt to slam into her? With a shoulder, chest, side? 6 for powerplaying.[-2] 'to face her a bit more directly,' you need an attempt here to. [-2] when he grabbed the scruff, it seemed like you assumed it was successful as you put ' and then release of his hold.' 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 6 for attack. +3 for biting scruff + 2 for barge +1 for trying to worsen scruff be pulling upwards 10 for injuries.First round Round one Galahad Total: 35/50 Round 2
NEphele: 8 for clarity- '[-2] where abouts did she ram his throat' in the centre, more to the left etc. 7 for powerplaying. [-3] refrain from telling us on what would happen if the land was successful, thats for the opponent to decide. 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 6 for attack. +2 for attempting to hit neck +1 for vital area. +3 for trying to bite on the sensetive part of leg. 5 for injuries. [-2] for bruising [-3] for bite to scruff Round two Nephele Total: 36/50 Galahad: 8 for clarity- [-2] where abouts on the right hip did he try to bite, the hips are a rather big area. 6 for powerplaying. [-2] there was to much movement with head throughout. [-2] you need an attempt when he scrambles back. 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 10 for attack. +3 for toe slam, +3 for bite +3 for body slam downwards +1 as this can crush the opponent and limit movement. 4 for injuries. -3 for bite -3 for barge to neck [delicate area] Round two Galahad Total: 38/50 Round 3
Nephele: 8 for clarity- [-2] i dont see how she can ram his right and bite it withought a lot of struggle with his weight 7 for powerplaying. [-3] she should of struggled a lot more under him, the weight would be very heavy. 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 5 for attack. +2 for barge +3 for bite 4 for injuries. -3 for bite - 3 for break in toes Round three Nephele Total: 34/50 Galahad: 8 for clarity- [-2] where abouts on the shoulder did he try to grab 6 for powerplaying. [-2] you need an attempt when kicking forward. [-2] 'he would throw his jaws at the left side of her body' you need an attempt here 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 6 for attack. +3 for attempted bite +3 for attempted stomp 5 for injuries. -3 for bites -2 for bruising due to the barge Round three Galahad Total: 35/50 Totals:
Nephele: 112/150 Galahad: 108/150 And the winner is...
Nephele! Galahad must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
Nephele- theres no need all would have healed due to delay. Galahad- same here Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Notes For Canttina Defenses where strong, you have improved a lot lately, congrats! For Keno Same to you really, you did very well and you've improved so much. just watch for clarity, but i have really nothing more to say - By [luisiana]
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