Kapten Erik
02-13-2017, 04:36 PM
(This post was last modified: 02-13-2017, 09:10 PM by Erik I.)
Out-Of-Character's Name: Rascal
Age: 28
Character's Name: Kapten Erik (goes by Erik)
Character Age: 2
Season of Birth: Autumn
Adult Height: 30”
Build: Medium
Appearance Description: Erik stands roughly at 30 inches from the shoulder; his build is well cared for and even his coat is kept as groomed as any wolf could attempt. His fur is a deep and rich black that covers majority of his body aside from some white that is naturally marked on his back legs and along the bottom of his tail. His fur is seemingly thicker along his neck but thins out around his lower stomach and paws. His paws are covered in fur, his front right paw has a single claw that is white.
Along his snout is a deep gash from where an encounter from his father went bad. The fur around the scar has grown back on some of the minor scratches aside from the singular deep gash. His eyes are a deep amber that shines gold in the sunlight. His ears are round and pretty much normal as far as wolf standards. His face is more angular than round and his face fur doesn’t flare out as much as most and even has a regal look as it flows into his neck fur.
Skills:Intellect & Navigation
Proof of Purchases:N/A
NEW MEMBERS ONLY!:[300] Small Companion ( Athene Cunicularia[Burrowing Owl]) Female named Rose, 20" wingspan
Age: 28
Character's Name: Kapten Erik (goes by Erik)
Character Age: 2
Season of Birth: Autumn
Adult Height: 30”
Build: Medium
Appearance Description: Erik stands roughly at 30 inches from the shoulder; his build is well cared for and even his coat is kept as groomed as any wolf could attempt. His fur is a deep and rich black that covers majority of his body aside from some white that is naturally marked on his back legs and along the bottom of his tail. His fur is seemingly thicker along his neck but thins out around his lower stomach and paws. His paws are covered in fur, his front right paw has a single claw that is white.
Along his snout is a deep gash from where an encounter from his father went bad. The fur around the scar has grown back on some of the minor scratches aside from the singular deep gash. His eyes are a deep amber that shines gold in the sunlight. His ears are round and pretty much normal as far as wolf standards. His face is more angular than round and his face fur doesn’t flare out as much as most and even has a regal look as it flows into his neck fur.
Skills:Intellect & Navigation
Proof of Purchases:N/A
NEW MEMBERS ONLY!:[300] Small Companion ( Athene Cunicularia[Burrowing Owl]) Female named Rose, 20" wingspan
02-13-2017, 08:47 PM
(This post was last modified: 02-13-2017, 08:54 PM by Shrapnel.)
The profile is good, you just are literally one word short of meeting the minimum word count for the appearance. You don't need to include a reference, but it is preferred that you elaborate on the white splotching.
Also, if you could please go post in maintenance to get your name changed. We don't allowed two names for account names. So your wolf's name should either be Kapten, or Erik, depending on what his actual name is. We only have a few exceptions in the case of (Bright Moon, Blue Moon, Autumn Star, ect)
Once those are fixed he can be accepted.
Edit: Also, your companion should go by wingspan inches, not height and the information for the companion should be listed in your profile.
Also, if you could please go post in maintenance to get your name changed. We don't allowed two names for account names. So your wolf's name should either be Kapten, or Erik, depending on what his actual name is. We only have a few exceptions in the case of (Bright Moon, Blue Moon, Autumn Star, ect)
Once those are fixed he can be accepted.
Edit: Also, your companion should go by wingspan inches, not height and the information for the companion should be listed in your profile.
02-13-2017, 09:24 PM
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