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Sable

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04-11-2014, 11:14 AM
Out-of-Character Name:Pandia
How did you get here?: top 50 rp sites
Age: real age is 20

Character's Name: Sable
Age: 2 years
Season of Birth: Spring
Adult Height:20 (in inches)
Appearance Description:she has a slender frame that is covered by soft black fur that looks like satin and has a double coat of fur and actually has three capes. Long guard hairs on top, which work like an umbrella to help shed moisture like a raincoat. her under fur keeps her warm in the cold months and undercoat is removed or shredded in the summer. Massive jaws form the foundation to her face the jaws have canines, sharp carnassials for cutting meat, and molars for crushing bone with very strong jaw muscles. Out of the wolf?s forty-two teeth, forty help her in securing its prey Her ears are large and rounded to capture sounds and they can be moved to scan and focus on sounds from different directions. This is the most acute sense she has. It is believed that the upper range of her hearing is upwards of 80 kHz. In other words she can hear up to 6 miles away in forest and 10 miles in open areas Her Orbs are honey coloured amber and are large therefore she can see shapes and, especially, movement over long distances, she is able to detect even the slightest movements of very small animals, such as a mosquito, at a distance of more than ten feet and the movement of larger animals at considerable distance



Tahlia

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Anais
04-15-2014, 03:19 PM
Two things I noted when reviewing Sable's profile and application.

The first is her height, which is listed as being 20 inches. Our smallest acceptable height is 23 inches, so her height would need to be edited to at least that or taller.

The second is her written appearance. It reads as if it was taken directly from Pandia's appearance and only the color references were changed. Is it possible for Sable to get her own individual written appearance?



Pandia

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04-22-2014, 06:36 PM
The height I can tweak, as for her appearance, all wolves look some what similar and sable has not got any markings that define her yet ( hopefully she will get some socks when I sort out the gems and stuff).



Tahlia

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Anais
04-26-2014, 12:10 PM
Wolves might all have the same sort of physiology, yes, but there are still different body types. Some are tall, short, thin, hefty, muscular, stocky, weak, frail, etc. Just like in people there's a variety of body types. And maybe some of these features make certain parts of their body stand out, like one may have too small ears or someone might never have grown into their feet and are clumsy because of it. As well, their fur may be diverse as well, some varieties being coarse, wiry, silky, smooth, easily matted, fluffy, thin. Just some things to consider.

Also, paws and legs that are a different color than the wolf's base coat are acceptable so long as the colors are within the realm of realism. So if you would like for Sable to have them you would need to decide that before she is accepted since character appearances cannot change from how they are when they are accepted with the exceptions being scars and greying due to age.