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Natana



Natana


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01-26-2014, 01:41 AM
Out-of-Character Name:Melody
How did you get here?: Rode in on the hurricane
Age: 21

Character's Name: Natana Sagebrush of the Nomads
Age: 6 years
Season of Birth: Spring
Height: 35 inches
Appearance Description: Dark grey covers the expanse of this dame's body, beginning from the base of her tail and ending at the top of her head. She bears a black mask over her face and the tips of her four long legs. A small dab of white fur can be found at the end of her tail and in the center of her broad chest. Her fur is thick enough to accomodate any climate and clumped around the base of her tail, showing a lack of interest in her own body and a high interest in the care of others. The thin white mark of her training is scarred into her forehead to show that she has been trained in the ways of her people.?



Virgil I

Loner

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01-27-2014, 03:04 PM
Just a few minor things! At 35 inches, she would actually have a large frame, not a medium one. Please adjust her profile accordingly!



Natana


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01-28-2014, 03:20 PM
Fixed!



Ashtoreth

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01-28-2014, 08:39 PM
I'm sorry for being such a stickler, but your personality is one word off. s:

If you can add one then Natana can be accepted. c:



Natana


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01-28-2014, 11:27 PM
Oh jeezus how embarrassing. :s

Now its fixed lol



Aures

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01-29-2014, 09:21 AM


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