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Octavia I

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09-05-2016, 09:14 AM (This post was last modified: 09-06-2016, 09:37 AM by Octavia I.)
Out-of-Character Name: Angalis
Age: 14

Character's Name: Octavia Ambrosia Arygos
Character Age: 1 year
Season of Birth: Winter
Adult Height: 25"
Appearance Description:Graceful. Poised. A woman of 25 inches in height. Her limbs strong yet slender. A body of muscle twisted, coiled, tightly over bone, vein, and blood. Medium sized, yet on the taller side of it. Her muscle, lean. Every inch of them defined, though they hide under her skin and fur. Her pelt is the whitest you could imagine. Think, soft, and long. Her tail is feathered on the bottom, and the edges of her ears rimmed in a darker white. Her eyes, two jewels of different colors. Her right eye is blue, a shimmering, heavenly blue. Her right eye is gold. A velvety gold.
Skills: Navigation & Intellect

Proof of Purchases: N/A
NEW MEMBERS ONLY!: Nope.



Shrapnel

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09-05-2016, 12:07 PM (This post was last modified: 09-05-2016, 12:09 PM by Shrapnel.)
Okay so your profile looks great! Just two things, if your character is 25 inches then they'd be classified as small, not medium, so just change that in your profile.

Also if you could explain your accessory in your joining app, like you did in your profile, you'll be all set.



Octavia I

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09-05-2016, 02:17 PM
Hey! I fixed her height and I did describe her necklace in her app! Or maybe I just misunderstood. Could you explain what you meant by it?



Shrapnel

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09-05-2016, 02:20 PM
"She has a necklace hanging around her neck, with three pendents. A large, cracked green stone, a medium blue stone, and a small white stone." If you'll add that for reference purposes for your app, that's what I meant cause in your app right now you just say "(Necklace with three or more pendants)".



Octavia I

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09-05-2016, 02:22 PM
Alrighty! I changed it! Sorry about that ^.^



Octavia I

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09-06-2016, 12:11 PM
Edited



Shrapnel

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09-07-2016, 01:44 PM
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