Holt
08-18-2021, 07:16 AM
Out-of-Character Name: Squish
Age: 16
Character's Name: Holt
Character Age: 5
Year of Birth: Year 10
Season of Birth: Fall
Adult Height: 33’’
Size: Medium
Build: Light-medium
Appearance Description:
Holt is a young maned wolf. He has a spiky red-ginger fur with a white underbelly, black legs, and mossy-green eyes. A black stripe goes from his forehead to the curve of his shoulders, creating a black mane along the back of his neck He's medium-sized and has a medium-light build.
Skills: Navigation
Proof of Purchases: click
NEW MEMBERS ONLY!: Canine pass and x1 Dice roll
Age: 16
Character's Name: Holt
Character Age: 5
Year of Birth: Year 10
Season of Birth: Fall
Adult Height: 33’’
Size: Medium
Build: Light-medium
Appearance Description:
Holt is a young maned wolf. He has a spiky red-ginger fur with a white underbelly, black legs, and mossy-green eyes. A black stripe goes from his forehead to the curve of his shoulders, creating a black mane along the back of his neck He's medium-sized and has a medium-light build.
Skills: Navigation
Proof of Purchases: click
NEW MEMBERS ONLY!: Canine pass and x1 Dice roll
08-18-2021, 05:13 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-18-2021, 05:13 PM by Shelby. Edited 1 time in total.)
Hello! There's some things that need to be changed before Holt can be accepted!
First thing is that the physical description in the profile needs to be at least 100 words and the personality needs to be at least 150 words. They're a little short on both of those so just bulk those out a bit. Second thing is that since it's currently Fall of Year 16 they would be 6 instead of 5 if they were born in Year 10. So you can either make them 6 or change the birth year to Year 11, whatever you prefer! Last thing is that the build needs to be either light or medium, it can't be both.
Also, you can pick two skills if you'd like - it's not necessary or required, but if it's something you'd like to do it's easier to go ahead and add it now than request it in maintenance later.
I'd suggest taking another look through character creation in the guidebook if you're not sure of anything! Otherwise we're happy to answer any questions c:
Please reply back here once he's ready to be looked at again!
First thing is that the physical description in the profile needs to be at least 100 words and the personality needs to be at least 150 words. They're a little short on both of those so just bulk those out a bit. Second thing is that since it's currently Fall of Year 16 they would be 6 instead of 5 if they were born in Year 10. So you can either make them 6 or change the birth year to Year 11, whatever you prefer! Last thing is that the build needs to be either light or medium, it can't be both.
Also, you can pick two skills if you'd like - it's not necessary or required, but if it's something you'd like to do it's easier to go ahead and add it now than request it in maintenance later.
I'd suggest taking another look through character creation in the guidebook if you're not sure of anything! Otherwise we're happy to answer any questions c:
Please reply back here once he's ready to be looked at again!
08-19-2021, 05:38 AM
Fixed!
Out-of-Character Name: Squish
Age: 16
Character's Name: Holt
Character Age: 5
Year of Birth: Year 11
Season of Birth: Fall
Adult Height: 33’’
Size: Medium
Build: Light
Appearance Description:
Holt is a young maned wolf. He has thick, spiky ginger-red fur with a white underbelly and tail tip, long black legs, and round mossy-green eyes. A black stripe goes from his scruff to the curve of his shoulders, creating a black mane along the back of his neck. His ears are long and round and the edges on the left one are scarred, with three claw marks in the shape of a "V" on the edges.
Skills: Navigation and Hunting
Proof of Purchases: https://www.ardently.org/search.php?action=results&sid=deccf56ba915fce91e5ba8f851d70020
NEW MEMBERS ONLY!: Canine pass and x1 Dice roll
Out-of-Character Name: Squish
Age: 16
Character's Name: Holt
Character Age: 5
Year of Birth: Year 11
Season of Birth: Fall
Adult Height: 33’’
Size: Medium
Build: Light
Appearance Description:
Holt is a young maned wolf. He has thick, spiky ginger-red fur with a white underbelly and tail tip, long black legs, and round mossy-green eyes. A black stripe goes from his scruff to the curve of his shoulders, creating a black mane along the back of his neck. His ears are long and round and the edges on the left one are scarred, with three claw marks in the shape of a "V" on the edges.
Skills: Navigation and Hunting
Proof of Purchases: https://www.ardently.org/search.php?action=results&sid=deccf56ba915fce91e5ba8f851d70020
NEW MEMBERS ONLY!: Canine pass and x1 Dice roll