my kingdom come [DM]
12-08-2013, 10:54 PM
thanks for the fight, raii! it was really fun c: since you have a skype now, feel free to send any questions you may have to my skype!
holy tits on a stick, thank you muse ♥
Pleasure surged through the ice queen?s steel veins as she felt the delightful shudder of fractured bone between her molars, appeased that she had managed to obtain her opponent?s mandible and had potentially downgraded the force at which he was able to bite. Numerous possibilities were presented to the wraith as their jaws interlocked ? with his lower jaw captive, she could potentially dislocate his jaw or permanently unhinge it with the simple wrenching of her own skull. Alas, as the male hit the ground, minutely clenching his jaws together to deepen the puncture wounds to the roof of her mouth and bridge of her snout to approximately a fourth-of-an-inch deep before releasing her, he somehow managed to free himself of her grip to his mandible by opening and closing his mouth. Although completely baffled by how he had managed to open and close his mouth to escape her grasp when she had a hold of his mandible [as, again, only the mandible does the biting/unhinging in a wolf and i never mentioned morphine would release it during my last post], the babe would not dwell too much on confusion, allowing herself to remain focused upon the fight as it waged on.
The renegade?s right forelimb would slide down from her left shoulder so that the babe could yet again straighten her posture, and as she reached towards the area beneath the male?s chin in hopes of asphyxiating him with her lifted right forepaw, she would be stopped short as the brute thrust his left forepaw into her right armpit, lightly lacerating the tender skin there as his nails snagged her flesh, causing the wounds to bleed mildly. In order to immediately reestablish her balance before she stumbled, the wraith allowed her paw to fall short of its intended target, essentially helping the male escape suffocation as he rolled away, leaving her nails to unintentionally purchase the left side of his neck as her right forepaw landed firmly on the ground once more.
As the brute rolled out of her reach, the wraith took a moment to ensure her defenses were secured, allowing for her skull to lower over her breast to protect her vital jugular, her chin to tuck against the curvature of her neck, and for her neck to scrunch to add further protection to her jugular in the form of excess rolls of fat. Shoulders would roll forward and hackles would rise to protect the nape of her neck, her limbs spreading equidistant apart while each bent slightly at the knee to lower her center of gravity. Toes would splay across the ground and her nails would bite into the soil for traction, abdomen tensing as her tail tucked and pressed against her underbelly for added protection. Finally, metallic eyes would narrow to slits as her ears folded against the contours of her crown, jaws unhinging while her lips curled back to expose tainted incisors, inviting him to make his charge.
The once-father of her children would not disappoint her, barreling forward like a battering ram, his skull lowered in an effort to impact her own as he sprinted the short distance between them, coming at her from head-on. Not wanting to get her skull bashed in by the larger heathen, the wench sidestepped swiftly to her right, causing the man to fall short of his intended target as his cranium collided with the upper portion of her left-sided chest, moderate bruising blossoming immediately from the area of impact. In order to avoid being sent backwards as he collided into her, the wraith would immediately throw her weight forward in an attempt to push into him to lessen the damage to her chest, left forepaw lifting slightly from the earth (grounded limbs shifting slightly to optimize her balance) before attempting to slam down upon Seraphim?s right forepaw in hopes that bringing her weight down upon it would break it or at least cause a few broken toes. Regardless of whether or not she succeeded in impacting his right forepaw, the wench would immediately plant her left forepaw back to the safety of earth as the male swung around to her left.
In order to remain directly in front of him to prevent the ninety-degree angle he desired to form with their bodies, her hips would swing out to her right as his swung to her left, cutting off the perpendicular angle as the male reared back. His right forepaw would find sanctuary on her left shoulder and his left forepaw would fall upon the right side of her neck due to her shift in position, therefore eliminating the possibility of being pushed onto her side; however, before gravity managed to pull his weight down, the wench would begin her attempted assault. Hind limbs would push the woman forward in an attempted effort to hit the center of her upper-chest against the center of his lower-chest, intending to shove the male backwards and to knock him off-balance with the force of her weight, hoping that his (likely) compromised balance [compromised because he?s only on his hinds, see ooc note in summary for further explanation] would only aide her in this endeavor. In synchronization with her attempted lurch forward, unhinged jaws would attempt to turn left towards the area approximately five inches below the male?s right elbow (on the forelimb), intending to break the limb with the pressure applied behind her hopeful bite to it. All the while, defenses would remain upheld to the best of her ability, hoping that the battle would end soon with a decided victor.
MORPHINE vs SERAPHIM
for
DEATH
round
I ? II ? III
ATTACK attempt to slam her left paw onto seraphim?s right paw in hopes of breaking it with the help of her weight, attempt to hit the center of her upper chest against the center of seraphim?s lower chest as she lurches forward when he rears back in hopes of knocking him off-balance, attempt to clamp onto seraphim?s right foreleg approximately five inches below his elbow as she lurches forward in hopes of breaking the limb.
DEFENSES lowered skull over breast, chin tucked, neck scrunched, shoulders rolled, hackles raised, limbs spread equally apart, limbs bent, toes splayed, claws out, abdomen tensed, tail tucked, eyes narrowed, ears pinned, jaws gaping, lips curled back. reestablishing her balance among her grounded limbs as she lifts her left forepaw. attempt to push forward with her hinds to avoid being pushed back from seraphim?s weight. moving to her right in order to avoid the skull-bash, swinging her hips to her right to bring herself directly in front of seraphim as he attempts to bring himself perpendicular to her.
INJURIES [previously: deep bruising to front of left shoulder, eighth-of-an-inch deep puncture wounds to the center of the bridge of her nose and the roof of her mouth, bleeding mildly.] puncture wounds to bridge of muzzle and roof of mouth now a fourth-of-an-inch deep, mildly bleeding still. light lacerations to armpit, bleeding mildly. moderate bruising to left-sided upper chest.
OOC sorry if this was a lot of movement in one post but i did my best to respond to each of seraphim's movements. in the post, [] indicate an ooc note while () are part of the actual ic post. in regard to stating that seraphim's balance is "compromised," i say this because his balance is more likely to be offset when all four limbs aren't grounded, even if his weight shifts evenly among his two grounded limbs.
Pleasure surged through the ice queen?s steel veins as she felt the delightful shudder of fractured bone between her molars, appeased that she had managed to obtain her opponent?s mandible and had potentially downgraded the force at which he was able to bite. Numerous possibilities were presented to the wraith as their jaws interlocked ? with his lower jaw captive, she could potentially dislocate his jaw or permanently unhinge it with the simple wrenching of her own skull. Alas, as the male hit the ground, minutely clenching his jaws together to deepen the puncture wounds to the roof of her mouth and bridge of her snout to approximately a fourth-of-an-inch deep before releasing her, he somehow managed to free himself of her grip to his mandible by opening and closing his mouth. Although completely baffled by how he had managed to open and close his mouth to escape her grasp when she had a hold of his mandible [as, again, only the mandible does the biting/unhinging in a wolf and i never mentioned morphine would release it during my last post], the babe would not dwell too much on confusion, allowing herself to remain focused upon the fight as it waged on.
The renegade?s right forelimb would slide down from her left shoulder so that the babe could yet again straighten her posture, and as she reached towards the area beneath the male?s chin in hopes of asphyxiating him with her lifted right forepaw, she would be stopped short as the brute thrust his left forepaw into her right armpit, lightly lacerating the tender skin there as his nails snagged her flesh, causing the wounds to bleed mildly. In order to immediately reestablish her balance before she stumbled, the wraith allowed her paw to fall short of its intended target, essentially helping the male escape suffocation as he rolled away, leaving her nails to unintentionally purchase the left side of his neck as her right forepaw landed firmly on the ground once more.
As the brute rolled out of her reach, the wraith took a moment to ensure her defenses were secured, allowing for her skull to lower over her breast to protect her vital jugular, her chin to tuck against the curvature of her neck, and for her neck to scrunch to add further protection to her jugular in the form of excess rolls of fat. Shoulders would roll forward and hackles would rise to protect the nape of her neck, her limbs spreading equidistant apart while each bent slightly at the knee to lower her center of gravity. Toes would splay across the ground and her nails would bite into the soil for traction, abdomen tensing as her tail tucked and pressed against her underbelly for added protection. Finally, metallic eyes would narrow to slits as her ears folded against the contours of her crown, jaws unhinging while her lips curled back to expose tainted incisors, inviting him to make his charge.
The once-father of her children would not disappoint her, barreling forward like a battering ram, his skull lowered in an effort to impact her own as he sprinted the short distance between them, coming at her from head-on. Not wanting to get her skull bashed in by the larger heathen, the wench sidestepped swiftly to her right, causing the man to fall short of his intended target as his cranium collided with the upper portion of her left-sided chest, moderate bruising blossoming immediately from the area of impact. In order to avoid being sent backwards as he collided into her, the wraith would immediately throw her weight forward in an attempt to push into him to lessen the damage to her chest, left forepaw lifting slightly from the earth (grounded limbs shifting slightly to optimize her balance) before attempting to slam down upon Seraphim?s right forepaw in hopes that bringing her weight down upon it would break it or at least cause a few broken toes. Regardless of whether or not she succeeded in impacting his right forepaw, the wench would immediately plant her left forepaw back to the safety of earth as the male swung around to her left.
In order to remain directly in front of him to prevent the ninety-degree angle he desired to form with their bodies, her hips would swing out to her right as his swung to her left, cutting off the perpendicular angle as the male reared back. His right forepaw would find sanctuary on her left shoulder and his left forepaw would fall upon the right side of her neck due to her shift in position, therefore eliminating the possibility of being pushed onto her side; however, before gravity managed to pull his weight down, the wench would begin her attempted assault. Hind limbs would push the woman forward in an attempted effort to hit the center of her upper-chest against the center of his lower-chest, intending to shove the male backwards and to knock him off-balance with the force of her weight, hoping that his (likely) compromised balance [compromised because he?s only on his hinds, see ooc note in summary for further explanation] would only aide her in this endeavor. In synchronization with her attempted lurch forward, unhinged jaws would attempt to turn left towards the area approximately five inches below the male?s right elbow (on the forelimb), intending to break the limb with the pressure applied behind her hopeful bite to it. All the while, defenses would remain upheld to the best of her ability, hoping that the battle would end soon with a decided victor.
for
DEATH
round
I ? II ? III
ATTACK attempt to slam her left paw onto seraphim?s right paw in hopes of breaking it with the help of her weight, attempt to hit the center of her upper chest against the center of seraphim?s lower chest as she lurches forward when he rears back in hopes of knocking him off-balance, attempt to clamp onto seraphim?s right foreleg approximately five inches below his elbow as she lurches forward in hopes of breaking the limb.
DEFENSES lowered skull over breast, chin tucked, neck scrunched, shoulders rolled, hackles raised, limbs spread equally apart, limbs bent, toes splayed, claws out, abdomen tensed, tail tucked, eyes narrowed, ears pinned, jaws gaping, lips curled back. reestablishing her balance among her grounded limbs as she lifts her left forepaw. attempt to push forward with her hinds to avoid being pushed back from seraphim?s weight. moving to her right in order to avoid the skull-bash, swinging her hips to her right to bring herself directly in front of seraphim as he attempts to bring himself perpendicular to her.
INJURIES [previously: deep bruising to front of left shoulder, eighth-of-an-inch deep puncture wounds to the center of the bridge of her nose and the roof of her mouth, bleeding mildly.] puncture wounds to bridge of muzzle and roof of mouth now a fourth-of-an-inch deep, mildly bleeding still. light lacerations to armpit, bleeding mildly. moderate bruising to left-sided upper chest.
OOC sorry if this was a lot of movement in one post but i did my best to respond to each of seraphim's movements. in the post, [] indicate an ooc note while () are part of the actual ic post. in regard to stating that seraphim's balance is "compromised," i say this because his balance is more likely to be offset when all four limbs aren't grounded, even if his weight shifts evenly among his two grounded limbs.
12-09-2013, 09:44 PM
THANK YOU ALY FOR A GREAT FIGHT and also for all of your help with my confusion ooc xD And sorry about all of my derps in this fight! GOOD LUCK <3
The brute would reach his target, his defenses maintained. His head remained lowered with his chin tucked to guard his throat, eyes narrowed, ears pinned against his head. Abdomen would remain taut, shoulders rolled forward, hackles raised, and legs and toes spread equidistant and bent slightly at the knees to distribute his weight. His tail would point out behind him, level with his spine. As he reached her and her left foot rose above his right he would slide the leg in her path back, but too late to be saved completely. Her assault would find its target on the ends of his two middle toes, which would break with the impact.
The wretch would redirect his intended head-butt, but he would pivot regardless, only realizing too late that she would anticipate his move and turn to face him once more. As his front legs rose to place his body at approximately a twenty-five degree angle from the ground, maintaining protection for his underside, his tail would curled against his stomach for added protection and his weight would shift to his hind legs, which remained in their original defensive position. He would take note quickly of her change in position and react accordingly, pushing off at the moment his paws would find purchase on her front and pulling his front legs toward him, knees slightly bent in preparation for reaching the ground. The woman would launch herself toward him and he would slide his hind right leg back slightly and dig his claws into the soil to brace for the impact.
As Morphine?s chest would contact his and an aching bruise would blossom, but it would be ignored. Her head would turn and her jaws would clamp down on his right ankle as a result of his attempt to pull the limb away from her body, breaking the bones within. Simultaneously the brute would unhinge his jaws in one final attempt to use the power of his bite. He would aim to clamp down on the exposed right side of her neck (see ooc explanation for comment), using his full force but focusing it primarily to the left side of his jaw. Regardless, this effort would turn the fracture in his right mandible to a full break, but he hoped to be rewarded with the tearing of flesh and tendon between his teeth.
Seraphim?s attempt to grab the bitch?s neck would take place just before he would thrust his left foreleg out toward the side of her right shoulder and push off of the ground with his hind left leg as he staggered from the impact of Morphine?s collision (since the bites took place at the same time as the chest bump, as per Morphine?s last round). He would try to use her grip on his ankle to his advantage as he fell, hoping that pushing with his left foreleg against her body as he fell as well as using his full weight would increase the speed and force of his fall. The position of her face turned to his right side would hopefully lead to that portion of her body hitting the ground first and bones would break as a result of the impact (Please note that hopefully carries through the whole sentence xD). If he was to die today, he wanted her to suffer from it.
Of course, if he lived, he would only be causing her extra pain on the path to her end.
Round 3 of 3 v. Morphine for Death
Attacks:Attempts to bite down on right side of Morphine?s neck (I don?t think that assuming it is exposed is pp because the right side would have to be exposed by her turning her head to the left) and tear flesh and tendon from the area. Attempts to push with left foreleg on her right shoulder and use dead weight to pull her to the ground on her face and break it.
Defenses: Eyes narrow, ears flat, tail raised (tucked against underside when he rises), head lowered, chin tucked, knees bent (on hind legs when he rises), widened stance (between hind legs when he rises), back toes spread, shoulders rolled forward, hind claws dug into ground, hackles rose, tightened abs.
Slid forepaw back, rose at 25 degrees to protect underside still, pushed off of Morphine as soon as paws landed, pulled forelegs back toward body and slightly bent knees, staggered back legs for better balance on impact.
Injuries: Deep bruising to his left shoulder, sprained ankle from the leg swipe, bruising to the left side of his torso from hitting the ground. Shallow wounds from Morphine?s first bite to his right cheek and from her second bite on both the top and bottom of his lower jaw. Fractured right mandible. Moderate cuts from Morphine?s claws on the left side of his neck. Minimal bleeding from wounds on mouth and fact, moderate bleeding from neck wound. Bruising on his forehead if he makes contact with Morphine's.
Two middle toes broken on right foot, moderate bruising on center chest, broken right ankle, right mandible fracture increase to a break, will have severe bruising to right side on falling to ground.
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The brute would reach his target, his defenses maintained. His head remained lowered with his chin tucked to guard his throat, eyes narrowed, ears pinned against his head. Abdomen would remain taut, shoulders rolled forward, hackles raised, and legs and toes spread equidistant and bent slightly at the knees to distribute his weight. His tail would point out behind him, level with his spine. As he reached her and her left foot rose above his right he would slide the leg in her path back, but too late to be saved completely. Her assault would find its target on the ends of his two middle toes, which would break with the impact.
The wretch would redirect his intended head-butt, but he would pivot regardless, only realizing too late that she would anticipate his move and turn to face him once more. As his front legs rose to place his body at approximately a twenty-five degree angle from the ground, maintaining protection for his underside, his tail would curled against his stomach for added protection and his weight would shift to his hind legs, which remained in their original defensive position. He would take note quickly of her change in position and react accordingly, pushing off at the moment his paws would find purchase on her front and pulling his front legs toward him, knees slightly bent in preparation for reaching the ground. The woman would launch herself toward him and he would slide his hind right leg back slightly and dig his claws into the soil to brace for the impact.
As Morphine?s chest would contact his and an aching bruise would blossom, but it would be ignored. Her head would turn and her jaws would clamp down on his right ankle as a result of his attempt to pull the limb away from her body, breaking the bones within. Simultaneously the brute would unhinge his jaws in one final attempt to use the power of his bite. He would aim to clamp down on the exposed right side of her neck (see ooc explanation for comment), using his full force but focusing it primarily to the left side of his jaw. Regardless, this effort would turn the fracture in his right mandible to a full break, but he hoped to be rewarded with the tearing of flesh and tendon between his teeth.
Seraphim?s attempt to grab the bitch?s neck would take place just before he would thrust his left foreleg out toward the side of her right shoulder and push off of the ground with his hind left leg as he staggered from the impact of Morphine?s collision (since the bites took place at the same time as the chest bump, as per Morphine?s last round). He would try to use her grip on his ankle to his advantage as he fell, hoping that pushing with his left foreleg against her body as he fell as well as using his full weight would increase the speed and force of his fall. The position of her face turned to his right side would hopefully lead to that portion of her body hitting the ground first and bones would break as a result of the impact (Please note that hopefully carries through the whole sentence xD). If he was to die today, he wanted her to suffer from it.
Of course, if he lived, he would only be causing her extra pain on the path to her end.
Attacks:Attempts to bite down on right side of Morphine?s neck (I don?t think that assuming it is exposed is pp because the right side would have to be exposed by her turning her head to the left) and tear flesh and tendon from the area. Attempts to push with left foreleg on her right shoulder and use dead weight to pull her to the ground on her face and break it.
Defenses: Eyes narrow, ears flat, tail raised (tucked against underside when he rises), head lowered, chin tucked, knees bent (on hind legs when he rises), widened stance (between hind legs when he rises), back toes spread, shoulders rolled forward, hind claws dug into ground, hackles rose, tightened abs.
Slid forepaw back, rose at 25 degrees to protect underside still, pushed off of Morphine as soon as paws landed, pulled forelegs back toward body and slightly bent knees, staggered back legs for better balance on impact.
Injuries: Deep bruising to his left shoulder, sprained ankle from the leg swipe, bruising to the left side of his torso from hitting the ground. Shallow wounds from Morphine?s first bite to his right cheek and from her second bite on both the top and bottom of his lower jaw. Fractured right mandible. Moderate cuts from Morphine?s claws on the left side of his neck. Minimal bleeding from wounds on mouth and fact, moderate bleeding from neck wound. Bruising on his forehead if he makes contact with Morphine's.
Two middle toes broken on right foot, moderate bruising on center chest, broken right ankle, right mandible fracture increase to a break, will have severe bruising to right side on falling to ground.
12-31-2013, 12:43 AM
MORPHINE vs. SERAPHIM for DEATH Round 1
Morphine: 10 for clarity. none 8 for powerplaying. ?If/When the wraith was within striking distance of her opponent? Avoid conditionals, or assuming she got within range. (-3) 10 for defenses. head lowered, eyes narrowed, ears pinned back, jaws parted, lips tucked, chin tucked, hackles raised, shoulders rolled, scrunched neck, limbs equally spread, legs bent, toes spread, toes biting into ground, tail, weight evenly distributed. 3 for attack. +4 Attempting to slam shoulder into chest (additional point given for maim attempt/use of momentum), -1 because this would probably slam his shoulder with equal force into Morphine?s own chest. +0 for bite to neck (She is 10 inches shorter than Seraphim. It is not logical to me that she?d be able to reach this part of his neck without rearing up), +0 for attempted trip up (if she was biting the other side of his neck, she wouldn?t be able to see her paw, so it?s not really realistic for it to be effective considering. Also not sure this movement is entirely realistic for a wolf) 10 for injuries.First round Round One Moprhine Total: 41/50 Seraphim: 0 for clarity. ?His shoulder would drop as he returned the charge? which shoulder? (-2) ?Seraphim would try to lessen the damage to his own shoulder by throwing his weight against hers? What is he trying to hit Morphine with? (-3)?and therefore would try to force her teeth to clamp around some portion of his maw? (-3) What part of his jaw? ?If he was successful in altering? It?s your job to say her jaws clamped around his maw. When you move your character and thus change where attacks may land, it?s your duty to say and explain where your opponent?s attacks hit. (-5) What damage did he get from them colliding? (-2) What side is he twisting his head to? (-2) 0 for powerplaying. ?If he was successful in altering? Don?t use conditionals (-3) ?He would hope that his change of position would line her outstretched jaws up with his face rather than his neck? Morphine is 10 inches shorter. If anything her jaws would be at his throat (-3) ?A grip on her muzzle, if he was successful in getting it, would aid him in his takedown attempt.? Conditional (-3) ? Upon hitting the ground, with or without Morphine, he would try to use the momentum from the fall to help him roll over his left side and get back to his feet quickly. ? Way too much movement in one post (-5). 10 for defenses. legs spread, body lowered, legs bent, weight centered, claws in ground, tail, ears, eyes, lips, shoulders rolled, hackles raised, head lowered, jaws parted. Rebalancing weight upon hind legs before lifting off. 4 for attack. +0 for attempt to bite Morphine?s muzzle (full points not awarded due to vagueness, and the fact that it?s hard to understand how twisting his head to the side would get him a bite on Morphine) +3 for attempting to pull Morphine to the ground with him (full points given due to size difference, which would make this attack incredibly effective, especially since Morphine?s opposite leg is lifted) +1 for effectiveness grip on muzzle would have on dragging down Morphine 10 for injuries. First round. Bruising to chest/shoulder, bite to jaw Round One Seraphim Total: 24/50 Round 2
Morphine: 7 for clarity. ?only her front half would lower to the earth as he hit the ground, neck muscles tensing and back attempting to slope to her right and away from his forelimb in an attempted effort to resist his weight? This doesn?t really make sense. It?s hard to understand what you?re trying to say here (-3) 0 for powerplaying. ?the male would fail to offset her balance completely? you need to explain why this failed, especially considering the large size difference between Seraphim and Morphine (-3) ?hoping to position herself straight out from the top portion of his ribcage? This is a lot of movement to make in the time that Seraphim is falling (-5). Honestly, considering the grip he has on her muzzle and the size difference, I am really uncertain how Morphine did not fall, even with her movements (-5). 10 for defenses. weight distributed amongst three grounded limbs, head lowered, chin tucked, jaws parted, tail, legs spread equally, legs bent, toes spread, claws gripping soil, eyes narrowed, ears pinned back, hackles raised, shoulders rolled, neck scrunched 5 for attack. +4 for attempting to bite Seraphim?s jaw (extra point granted for maim attempt) -3 for potential for this attack to further harm Morphine by driving his lower teeth up through the roof of her mouth. +4 for attempting to stamp on Seraphim?s throat (extra point for vital area) 4 for injuries. deep bruising to left shoulder (-2) Bite/grip to muzzle/mouth (-4) Round Two Morphine Total: 26/50 Seraphim: 6 for clarity. How much damage was done to his neck? (-2) ?Seraphim would swing his hips around? Which direction? (-2) 0 for powerplaying. ?In immediate reaction, he would tighten his grip upon her nose? Even though it seems logical that he?d be able to do this, you still need an ?attempt?, because it affects Morphine. (-5). How does he release Morphine when she?s gripping his jaw back? (-5) It doesn?t seem logical to me that he would be able to avoid Morphine?s paw with his roll (-3) ?as he leapt deftly to his paws just a few feet away from the witch and swung his hips to meet her head on again.? Way too much movement for one post. (-5) ?A moderate bruise would bloom on his own skull from the impact if it occurred, but he would ignore it.? Don?t write this injury yet. It should be in the next round, otherwise you?re assuming it hit (I?m deducting this in the next round if it occurs) (-3) ?Immediately upon reaching her? Don?t assume he was able to reach her (-2) ?If he succeeded, he would drop the entirety of his weight onto his front paws? Conditional (-3) 10 for defenses. tail tucked, legs spread, body lowered, knees bent, claws biting ground, weight on toes, hackles raised, shoulders rolled, head lowered, chin tucked, eyes narrowed, ears pinned back. 4 for attack. +1 Attempting to bite down harder +1 for paw attack (really wouldn?t be effective enough; it wouldn?t damage Morphine at all and probably wouldn?t stand to delay her attack) +1 for attempting to head butt Morphine (effective attack due to distance, potential to give Seraphim brain damage. Also puts him in an awkward position because of the 10 inch height difference. Extra point for maim attempt) +1 for attempting to knock Morphine down (considering he?d have no momentum behind this and Morphine has a lot of time to balance herself, it?s not likely to work. Additional point for maim attempt) 3 for injuries. Fractured mandible (-5), moderate scrapes to neck (-2) Round Two Seraphim Total: 23/50 Round 3
Morphine: 6 for clarity- ?Although completely baffled by how he had managed to open and close his mouth to escape her grasp when she had a hold of his mandible? Honestly, comments like this should be left out of fights. If there is confusion, PM Raii or ask a judge. It?s not polite to have something like this said in character (-2). ?the wraith would immediately throw her weight forward in an attempt to push into him? Push into him with what? You probably mean her chest, but specification is still needed. (-2) 4 for powerplaying. ?Would immediately throw her weight forward in an attempt to push into him to lessen the damage? This would probably worsen the damage, so it?s confusing why it didn?t do that? (-2) ?Regardless of whether or not she succeeded in impacting his right forepaw, the wench would immediately plant her left forepaw back to the safety of earth as the male swung around to her left.? Too much movement. Allow Seraphim to react to the foot before placing it down (-2). I didn?t deduct for this because Seraphim?s movement almost forced Morphine?s movement, but charging forward and completely turning around after is a bit too much movement. Lack of damage from Seraphim?s claws (they landed and he was moving down, they should have done some sort of damage) (-2) 8 for defenses. head lowered, chin tucked, neck scrunched, shoulders rolled, hackles raising, legs spread equally, legs bent, body lowered, toes spread, claws biting into soil, tail, eyes narrowed, ears pinned back, jaws parted, lips curled. -2 didn?t adjust balance when she lifted her foot. 9 for attack. +1 for attempting to counter head butt (considering the size differences, she might strain his neck, but I don?t think it?s likely she would be able to avoid being pushed back as intended), +3 for attempting to break Seraphim?s toes (one point not given due to the fact that this would probably knock Morphine off balance, bonus point given for maim attempt) +1 for attempt to off balance Seraphim (while it?s likely she would offset his balance by moving forwards, it?s unlikely their chests would collide due to the height difference) +4 for bite to leg (extra point for maim attempt) 5 for injuries. Worsened damage to mouth (-2), slight lacerations to arm pit (-1), Moderate bruising to chest (-1). scrapes to shoulder and neck (deducted by judge, -1) Round Three Morphine Total: 32/50 Seraphim: 4 for clarity- ?As Morphine?s chest would contact his and an aching bruise would blossom, but it would be ignored? How much damage was caused? (-2) Specify how many bones in his ankle (there are quite a few) were broken (-2) ?The position of her face turned to his right side? Considering his broken leg is in her mouth and she was attacking from the inside, his leg and side are more likely to hit the ground first (-2) 6 for powerplaying. ?As he reached her and her left foot rose above his right he would slide the leg in her path back, but too late to be saved completely.? You can?t change your attack after it?s already been launched (-2). ?bones would break as a result of the impact? I realize you put an OOC note after this, but you still need a ?hopefully? in here. I?m not allowed to judge by OOC notes. You?re not allowed to dictate what damage Morphine would get. (-2) 10 for defenses. head lowered, chin tucked, eyes narrowed, ears pinned back, shoulders rolled, hackles raised, legs spread, toes spread, knees bent, tail, weight in hind legs, claws in soil. 5 for attack.+3 bite to neck (full points not awarded due to him not being able to use his jaw?s full force, bonus point for vital area/vulnerability use)+2 for knock over attempt (while more likely than his previous attempts to knock her over, still not as likely considering his more off balance position and her balanced stance. Extra point given for Morphine?s muzzle being turned that way, which would potentially result in her jaw/mouth being damaged upon impact) 1 for injuries. -1 moderate bruising to chest, -1 moderate bruising to head, -3 broken toes, -5 broken right ankle Round Three Seraphim Total: 26/50 Totals:
Morphine: 99/150 Seraphim: 73/150 And the winner is...
Morphine! Final results pending Vivien?s judging. Damage:
Morphine- pending. Seraphim - pending. Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. Honestly, with the both of you the issue was too much movement. Fights take place in fractions of seconds; you need to realize what timing would work in those fractions of seconds. Both of you did excellent with defenses, with very few deductions there. Aly, the big thing that got you was with Morphine's positioning, and why certain things did and didn't happen with her. You did very well to include aggressive attacks and maim attempts, which were appropriate considering this was a fight to the death. Raii, I honestly felt like, while your taking of damage was admirable, more counters and avoidance of heavy damage could be used, for if you notice the difference in injuries really accounted for a lot of the score difference in this fight. It also might have been beneficial for Seraphim to have gone for more vital areas on Morphine, and to try to maim her more and make better use of their massive size difference. If you guys have any questions about this, feel free to Skype me or hit me up with private message about what you would like clarification on. - By [MUSE]
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12-31-2013, 12:53 AM
(This post was last modified: 01-01-2014, 04:25 PM by Deteste.)
Seraphim vs. Morphine for Death Round 1
Morphine:CLARITY: 10 / 10 Clear post. POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No powerplaying found. DEFENSES: 8 / 10 Full points for protected throat, narrowed eyes, pinned ears, ready jaws, balanced stance, splayed toes, tensed stance. ATTACK: 10 / 10 Full points for slam to Seraphim's right shoulder, attack to left side of neck, swipe at left limb. INJURIES: 10 / 10 First round. No injuries. Round one Morphine Total: 48 / 50 Seraphim: CLARITY: 9 / 10 "he would hope that his change of position would line her outstretched jaws up with his face rather than his neck" You're supposed to determine where the attack lands. POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No powerplaying found. DEFENSES: 10 / 10 Full points for ready stance, spalyed toes, balaned tail, pinned ears, narrowed eyes, ready jaws, protected throat, counter to shoulder attack. ATTACK: 10 / 10 Full points for shoulder attack, attack to muzzle, grip with left limb. INJURIES: 10 / 10 First round; no penalty. Bruised left shoulder, bite wound to face/maw, sprained anckle, lightly bruised side. Round one Seraphim Total: 49 / 50 Round 2
Morphine: CLARITY: 10 / 10 Clear post. POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No powerplaying found. DEFENSES: 10 / 10 Full points for protected throat, ready jaws, tucked tail, tense stance, balanced stance, splayed toes, narrowed eyes, pinned ears, raised hackles. ATTACK: 8 / 10 Full points for continued attack to cheek, attack to Seraphim's lower jaw, attack to throat. INJURIES: 6 / 10 Bruised left shoulder, bite wound to upper jowl. Round two Morphine Total: 44 / 50 Seraphim: CLARITY: 7 / 10 "his roll would begin" in which direction is he rolling? "If he should fail..." avoid using if this/then that statements especially when the ifs are so different from one another. POWERPLAYING: 8 / 10 "his jaws would part and he would pull his head back" You assume Morpine also let go. DEFENSES: 10 / 10 Full points for protecting injured jaw, tucked tail, roll to side?, balanced tail, balnaced stance, ready stance, splayed claws, raised hackles, protected throat, narrowed eyes, pinned ears. ATTACK: 7 / 10 Full points for continueing attack to Morphine's upper jaw, attack to Morphine's lower chest, headbutt to head, shove to left side. INJURIES: 2/ 10 Minor bitewound to right cheek, bite wound to bottom jowl, fractured right mandible, scratch to left side of neck. Round two Seraphim Total: 34 / 50 Round 3
Morphine: CLARITY: 10 / 10 Viv sucks, yo. POWERPLAYING: 4 / 10 "Although completely baffled by how he had managed to open and close his mouth" Please be polite in your posts. "in hopes that bringing her weight down upon it would break it" if her weight is balanced on her other legs, this isn't really possible. " to prevent the ninety-degree angle he desired to form with their bodies" Perhaps Seraphim was also pivoting while she moved? Try to give your opponent time/space to react and not to completely change positioning. DEFENSES: 10 / 10 Full points for protected throat, balanced stance, splayed toes, tense stance, tucked tail, narrowed eyes, pinned ears, ready jaws, counter to headbutt. ATTACK: 5 / 10 Full points for attack to lower chest, attack to right limb. INJURIES: 5 / 10 Damage more severe to upper jowl, scratches to armpit, bruised upper chest. Round three Morphine Total: 29 / 50 Seraphim: CLARITY: 10 / 10 Clear post. POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No power playing found. DEFENSES: 10 / 10 Full points for protected throat, narrowed eyes, pinned ears, tense stance, raised hackles, splayed toes, balanced stance, balanced tail, counter to position change. ATTACK: 4 / 10 Full points for attack to right side of neck. INJURIES: 0 / 10 Two broken toes on right foot, bruising to chest, broken right ankle, broken right mandible, bruising to right side. Round three Seraphim Total: 34 / 50 Totals:
Morphine: 126 /150 Seraphim: 117 / 150 And the winner is...
Morphine! Because both judges have the same verdict, this fight will result in Seraphim's death. Damage:
Morphine - Damage more severe to upper jowl, scratches to armpit, bruised upper chest. Bruised left shoulder, bite wound to upper jowl. *Seraphim's last attack pending; determined by your next post. Seraphim- Bruised left shoulder, bite wound to face/maw, sprained anckle, lightly bruised side. Minor bitewound to right cheek, bite wound to bottom jowl, fractured right mandible, scratch to left side of neck. Two broken toes on right foot, bruising to chest, broken right ankle, broken right mandible, bruising to right side. Notes:
Sup dudes. I appreciate the clarity and lack of powerplaying in this right. It was very realistic, very clever moves were used in the fight and I had a great time judging it.Aly - Great job as always! Your attacks were awesome. Plz refrain from using OOC too much in your posts, judges assigned to a DM will be able to determine realism on their own and the comments can come off as rude. Raii - You also did an amazing job! I am really impressed! The one thing I would suggest, and I STRONGLY suggest this, don't give in so much to your opponent's attacks. You allowed severe consequences to almost each attack by Morphine and lost many points because of this. - Vivien |
01-02-2014, 07:46 PM
The delightful crack! of splintered bone breached the ice queen?s auditory system as her powerful incisors connected further down upon her adversary?s forelimb than desired, the bone-crushing velocity of her jaws easily breaking the male?s ankle as he pulled the appendage closer to his chest to avoid the brunt of her assault. Although she had targeted the area nearest to the elbow in hopes of eliminating Seraphim?s ability to maintain his footing, breaking his ankle would, essentially, help the wraith achieve the same result, and pleasure soon found its way writhing through her interior as she realized the bleakness of the behemoth?s situation. His injuries were adding up, and even as the male managed to drive his incisors through the center-portion of her right-sided neck to approximately an inch in depth, she could practically taste victory upon her tongue. The sensation only intensified as her chest succeeded in colliding with that of the male?s, forcing him to collapse upon his side as the satisfying cacophony of ruptured bone yet again drifted through her pinned ears ? his bite had obviously done him more harm than good.
His forepaw would press firmly against her shoulder, the force of his mass successful in bringing her down with him as he fell, but the wraith would not allow her precious face to receive the brunt of his weight. Jaws would unhinge from the male?s ankle, muzzle angled upward towards the brute?s countenance and upper neck as she sought to finish what she started. Skull would tilt to the left and jaws would lunge for the upper right-sided portion of Seraphim?s neck, lower jaw seeking to pierce the area just beneath the male?s chin to puncture the veins located there while her upper jaw would seek the upper-right corner of his neck. Body would hit the earth with a great thud!, deep bruising blossoming upon her left side as it impacted the earth, her adversary?s body following suit and bringing his vulnerable neck between her gluttonous jaws where her incisors would slave over penetrating his veins. Blood poured into her aching jaws, a deep rumble resonating through her chest cavity out of satisfaction ? it was over now. Rather than end the behemoth?s life quickly, the phantom would relinquish her grasp to his neck, struggling free from her close proximity to the fallen beast as she regained her footing, metallic gaze sweeping through the masses that had gathered before finally pinpointing the pathetic heap of her fallen opponent.
?You brought this upon yourself, my sweet,? the wraith would state placidly despite the pain that radiated from the wounds obtained, speech meant only for his ears as she drew nearer to his side to examine the damage dealt. Yes ? she was certain that she had succeeded in her endeavor, but would remain at his side to witness as the life drained from his meager body. A smirk would claim her tainted countenance as she waited, the adrenaline undying even through the recognition of victory. She had purged the world of another traitor ? a crusade she had taken up upon the demise of the renegade Cyanide.