The rhythm's a little off
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She would swiftly follow behind the girl; who she could only hope had a lot to learn like S'alkrie has. The placid babe had witnessed many fights, and had learnt a lot of defenses and few attacks. She loved to witness from afar, and she could only hope to use it to her advantage. They where currently head on, and had around 3 feet apart from eachother. " This will be fun, good luck!" She meant it, if they had to be partners perhaps in the future they could help eachother out; but for now her only focus was to try and win- Hoping Etern would improve where she lacked.
S'alkrie would then set her defenses quickly, Hackles raised, tail tucked, eyes slit, ears pinned, weight evenly distributed, Muscles tensed, teeth bared, crown slightly tucked to protect neck. She wasted no time, and would soon attempt to close the distance by lunging; hoping for her left shoulder to hit against Talvi's left shoulder in the hopes to knock her slightly of balance. While doing this S'alkrie would aim to grasp the left side of her opponents neck to hopefully stun her and scare her to not move, If successful S'alkrie will keep hold for as long as she can. She would be aiming on the neck near the shoulder. She doesnt aim to seriously hurt, but just enough so that she can have a firm enough hold. [since its there first time sparring and their new to all possibilities Sal hopes that there both new to it all]. S'alkries right paw would try to scratch Talvi's left side repeatedly near the bottom in the hopes to irritate the skin and cause minor bleeding. As the right paw would lift S'alkrie would shift her weight to 3 paws the best that she could. Hoping to limit Talvi's movement even further Sal would then aim her right paw to anker over her back [after attempting to scratch]and her left paw across her chest. To make it Worse, Sal would try to lean as much weight as possible to see if she could get Talvi of balance again.
S'alkrie Vs Talvi 1/2!
Defenses- Hackles raised, tail tucked, eyes slit, ears pinned, weight evenly distributed, Muscles tensed, teeth bared, crown slightly tucked to protect neck.
Attacks- She would aim to close their small distance by lunging, hoping that their left shoulders collide to stun Talvi. Sal would then aim to grasp her neck near the shoulder to spook Talvi and if successful Sal will not let go. Her front right paw would also aim to scratch repeatedly at at the bottom of Talvi's Side to irritate it. Once doing so Sal would aim to limit Talvi's movements by ankering her right paw over her back and left paw over chest.
Injuries- First round!
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As the fight would begin, S'alkrie would hope it'd be rather short but fun. This was her first time sparring and she was keen to do well. As she launched her attacks, The bite that was aimed for the neck near the shoulder would instead lands at the top of Talvi's head. It came to a sudden surprise, seeing as the merle girl was taller and S'alkrie was aiming lower. But, Sal could easily work with it, hoping to be more successful next time. Her teeth had scraped lightly, not enough to seriously hurt. Her attempt to try to limit Talvi had gone almost perfectly. Her right paw which was supposed to anchor the back instead landed on the scruff, though her left paw did become successful and wrap around the chest. S'alkries eyes would remain slit, tail tucked and ears pinned which came rather naturally. Her muscles would tense and she would quickly try to reajust her balance with two paws on the ground and her upper half, hoping to lean against Talvi's.
Just as S'alkrie was about to move her crown, Talvi's head would meet impact with the side of her left jaw. Her teeth would bare in response, it was painful and it would hurt later in the day. As soon as Sal felt it she would launch her attack straight away, hoping to grab the start of the scruff which is rather thin. If she was successful and grabbed it, S'alkrie would pull harshly as to hurt Talvi and shoot her head up slightly with the force. But just as she began to do her attack, Talvi's fangs would meet the top of S'alkrie left shoulder, snapping across the thin layer causing it to bleed slight. Due to the fact Sal had launched her own attack at the scruff, it jerked her frame back slightly, making it so that Talvi just missed the neck, each time S'alkrie moved, she would readjust her weight on two paws the best that she could. Hoping that Talvi's legs would start hurting due to S'alkrie being on top of her, Sal would attempt to drop all of her weight onto her, leaning slightly forward in the hopes that it'll knock Talvi onto the ground on her right side. She hopes to have a firm clasp on Talvi's scruff [previous attack], as to limit all of her movement. If successful, S'alkrie would be on top of her.
S'alkrie vs Talvi 2/2!
Defenses- Tail tucked, Eyes slit, Ears pinned, Muscles tensed, evening out balance. Teeth bared
Attacks- As soon as her jaw smacked against Talvi's head, S'alkrie would quickly move her head and seek to grab the start of her scruff where its thin. She'd pull back to hopefully cause pain, S'alkries last attempt is to drop all of her weight onto Talvi, leaning slightly forwards so that she falls to the floor on her right side, hoping to win by limiting all the movement she can.
Injuries- Hurt jaw, Bite to shoulder
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S'alkrie VS Talvi Round 1
S'alkrie:CLARITY: 8 / 10 POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 DEFENSES: 7 / 10 ATTACK: 7 / 10 INJURIES: 10 / 10 Round one S'alkrie Total: 41 / 50 Talvi: CLARITY: 9 / 10 POWERPLAYING: 9 / 10 DEFENSES: 8 / 10 ATTACK: 8 / 10 INJURIES: 10 / 10 Round one Talvi Total: 44 / 50 Round 2
S'alkrie: CLARITY: 7 / 10 POWERPLAYING: 9 / 10 DEFENSES: 5 / 10 ATTACK: 7 / 10 INJURIES: 8 / 10 Round two S'alkrie Total: 36 / 50 Talvi: CLARITY: 9 / 10 POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 DEFENSES: 4 / 10 ATTACK: 7 / 10 INJURIES: 8 / 10 Round two Talvi Total: 38 / 50 Totals:
S'alkrie: 77 /100 Talvi: 82 /100 And the winner is...
Talvi! S'alkrie must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
S'alkrie - Light brusing to the jaw, shallow bite mark on the shoulder and possibly to the side of her neck from Talvi's last attack Talvi- Shallow graze on the top of her head and bite to the top of her scruff Notes:
Lui: I loved the attacks you used, but, especially for the first post, there was sometimes too much going on at once and it would get jumbled and hard to read. I'd also suggest actually putting every move of the fight into the post and not in brackets. Otherwise really good!Eldar: Only note I have is to pack in more defenses and play around more with the attacks. The only part that was a little hard to understand was Talvi's very last attack. Very good! Both: Very realistic first fight for the both of them and well writen, enjoyed reading it. If you have any questions let me know <3 -Shelby |