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Alonzo



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10-14-2014, 10:11 PM
Out-of-Character Name: Thena
How did you get here?:A friend is on the site, and I figured I would join
Age: 20

Character's Name:Alonzo
Age:3
Season of Birth:Spring
Adult Height: 30 inches
Appearance Description: Alonzo has a lovely coat of pitch black fur. It hasn't got a single patch of any other colour in it. It is medium in length. It gets very fluffy in winter. His fur is always very tidy and clean. He has dark green eyes, the colour of the darkest ivy leaf. His tail is long and fluffy all the time.

He is medium in size, 30 inches in height and 88 pounds in weight. He has quite massive paws, that seem out of proportion with his body. His face is quite long, and narrow. His ears stick up constantly. His body is lean, built for agility and speed. He has long legs that glide easily along the ground.
Calling: Wanderer
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Eldarwen


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10-15-2014, 01:04 AM
Hello there Thena.

Welcome to Ala, unfortunately your appearance is a little short, it should be at least 100 words. Good news is that's the only thing that needs to be changed so once that is sorted Alonzo can be accepted.



Alonzo


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10-15-2014, 01:31 AM
I have add a bit more, is that enough now? I can add more if needed, just finding it a little bit hard :)



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Easter 2022Toys for Tots
10-16-2014, 11:44 AM
Just one issue I see - you added the words to your post here instead of your profile so your profile is still short on appearance. :) Once you put it in there, you should be good to go, just post here again to let us know when you've finished.



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10-16-2014, 09:42 PM


Welcome to Alacritis!

Now that you're fully accepted, here are some important links you may find useful.


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