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10-11-2015, 10:37 PM

TINARO vs ALLEN for SPAR



ROUND ONE


TINARO

CLARITY
- All clear!
Total: 10

POWERPLAY
- 0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (legs) + 1 (knees) + 1 (claws) + 1 (toes) + 1 (shoulders) + 1 (hackles) + 1 (head) + 1 (tail) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (ears)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 2 shoulder slam
+ 3 bite attempt
Total: 5

INJURIES
- First round!
Total: 10

Total for Round One: 45 / 50


ALLEN

CLARITY
- 2 “by the leg (…) by the shoulder” Which is it? Be clear.
Total: 8

POWERPLAY
- 0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (head) + 1 (ears) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (neck) + 1 (shoulders) + 1 (knees) + 1 (toes) + 1 (claws) + 1 (tail) + 1 (hackles)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 3 bite counter
+ 1 trip attempt
Total: 4

INJURIES
- Round 1!
Total: 10

Total for Round One: 42 / 50


ROUND TWO


TINARO

CLARITY
- 0
Total: 10

POWERPLAY
- 2 “by forcefully placing” You must attempt this as well, even if you say attempt to shove previously.
- 2 “Whist shoving his opponent” You have to attempt these movements.
Total: 6

DEFENSES
+ 1 (toes) + 1 (muscles) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (ears) + 1 (chin) + 1 (lips) + 1 (hackles) + 1 (shoulders)
Total: 8

ATTACK
+ 2 light bite to cheek
+ 2 shove
Total: 4

INJURIES
- 2 moderate lacerations to right shoulder
- 1 mild bruise to right shoulder
Total: 7

Total for Round Two: 35 / 50

ALLEN

CLARITY
- 0
Total: 10

POWERPLAY
- 2 “As he pushed” attempt!
Total: 8

DEFENSES
+ 1 (ears) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (shoulders) + 1 (hackles) + 1 (tail) + 1 (legs) + 1 (knees) + 1 (claws) + 1 (chin)
Total: 9

ATTACK
+ 2 body thrust
+ 3 bite attempt
+ 1 belly severity
Total: 6

INJURIES
- 1 light lacerations to cheek
Total: 9

Total for Round Two:  42 / 50


Totals:


TINARO
31 + 45 = 76 / 100

ALLEN
42 + 42 = 84 / 100


And the winner is...

ALLEN
TINARO must give up by submitting, fleeing or passing out.




Damage:

TINARO
moderate lacerations to right shoulder – 2 ooc weeks
mild bruise to right shoulder – 4 ooc days


ALLEN
Moderate lacerations to neck – 2 ooc weeks
Light lacerations to cheek – 4 ooc days


Notes:

Tips for writing and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here):

MILLIE
You lost a few points on forgotten defenses, so keep an eye on those. Also watch for your attempts! You need to attempt any movement that directly affects your opponent or assumes their position. Even if you state an attempt to shove you must attempt to place your paws as well. Great spar!

KENO!
Great spar as well! Watch your attempts as well, and your defenses. Really, take Millie’s notes to heart as well. You also need to be clear on where your attacking, as well. Clarity and attempting and defenses, watch ‘em and you’ll do great!

- By [Arin]