- 2 “by forcefully placing” You must attempt this as well, even if you say attempt to shove previously.
- 2 “Whist shoving his opponent” You have to attempt these movements.
TINARO must give up by submitting, fleeing or passing out.
Damage:
TINARO
moderate lacerations to right shoulder – 2 ooc weeks
mild bruise to right shoulder – 4 ooc days
ALLEN
Moderate lacerations to neck – 2 ooc weeks
Light lacerations to cheek – 4 ooc days
Notes:
Tips for writing and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here):
MILLIE
You lost a few points on forgotten defenses, so keep an eye on those. Also watch for your attempts! You need to attempt any movement that directly affects your opponent or assumes their position. Even if you state an attempt to shove you must attempt to place your paws as well. Great spar!
KENO!
Great spar as well! Watch your attempts as well, and your defenses. Really, take Millie’s notes to heart as well. You also need to be clear on where your attacking, as well. Clarity and attempting and defenses, watch ‘em and you’ll do great!
