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10-12-2015, 12:22 AM

BASS vs QUELT for SPAR



ROUND ONE


QUELT

CLARITY
- 2 “Bass lower neck near the shoulder” Which side?
Total: 8

POWERPLAY
-  0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (legs) + 1 (tail) + 1  (toes) + 1(nails) + 1 (knees) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (ears) + 1 (lips) + 1 (hackles) + 1 (scruff)
Total:  10

ATTACK
+ 2 shoulder slam
+ 3 bite attempt
Total: 5

INJURIES
- First round!
Total: 10

Total for Round One: 43 / 50


BASS

CLARITY
- All clear!
Total: 10

POWERPLAY
- 0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (shoulders) + 1 (weight)  + 1 (knee) + 1 (toes) + 1 (claws) + 1 (ears) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (chin) + 1 (tail) + 1 (lips)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 3 neck attempt
+ 1 severity
+ 1 trip attempt
Total: 5

INJURIES
- First Round!
Total: 10

Total for Round One:  45 / 50

ROUND TWO


QUELT

CLARITY
- 2 “making a half inch wound” What is the severity? A half inch wound in one spot could be way more severe than in another.
Total: 8

POWERPLAY
- 2 “tugging his head to the right” You’re assuming you got the bite.  
Total: 8

DEFENSES
+ 1 (legs) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (ears) + 1 (chin) + 1 (jaws) + 1 (shoulders) + 1 (scruff) + 1 (tail)
Total: 8

ATTACK
+ 3 grip attempt
+ 2 pull attempt
+ 1 paw stomp
Total: 6

INJURIES
- 2 moderate lacerations to chest
Total: 8

Total for Round Two:  38 / 50

BASS

CLARITY
- All clear!
Total: 10

POWERPLAY
- 0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (head) + 1 (ears) + 1 (weight) + 1 (shoulders) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (tail) + 1 (toes) + 1 (claws) + 1 (knees) + 1 (legs)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 2 body slam
+ 3 bite to belly / ribs
+ 1 severity
Total: 6

INJURIES
- 1 minor lacerations to base of skull
Total: 9

Total for Round Two:  45 / 50


Totals:


QUELT
43 + 38 = 81 / 100

BASS
45 + 45 = 90 / 100


And the winner is...

BASS
QUELT must give up by submitting, fleeing or passing out.




Damage:

QUELT
Moderate lacerations to chest – 2 OOC weeks

BASS
Moderate bruise to shoulder – 1 OOC week
Minor lacerations to skull – 4 OOC days

Notes:

Tips for writing and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here):

RIVS
Watch nested attacks / assumptions. Be sure your outlining severeity of wounds as well. You lost a some good points with defenses as well, so be careful about listing all of them.

EVE
Excellent spar, good moves. Keep up the good work :)

- By [Arin]