+ 3 eye attack
+ 1 maim attempt
+ 2 body bulldoze
+ 2 chest slam
+ 1 leg wrap around
+ 1 grip attempt
Total: 10
INJURIES
- Rnd 1!
Total: 10
Total for Round One: 50 / 50
ARIETTA
CLARITY
- 2 “adjusting her body 30 degrees t the right” Did you spin? Twist? If your just shifting to the right it would be far clearer to “sidestep” unless your actually pivoting, in which case…how?
-2 “Strike the bony part of her left shoulder at a 45 degree angle” How? Did you pivot? Are you at a 45 degree angle? Towards or away from Birna? What’s going on…
Total: 6
POWERPLAY
- 2 assumed – by going to knock your shoulder against her knee then raising to bite her back (thus taking your shoulder away from the knee) it’s assuming the attack had been successful in a way. You can’t do an attack and then move away from it to do another attack in the same post.
+ 3 bite to left thigh
+ 1 grip attempt
+ 2 shoulder throw
+ 2 shoulder to knee
+ 1 paw slam
Total: 9
INJURIES
- 1 minor bruising to left knee
-2 moderate lacerations to top of hip
Total: 7
Total for Round Two: 46 / 50
ARIETTA
CLARITY
- 2 “60 degree to her own left as well as move forward 3 steps” Uh…weren’t you all up and happy with Birna’s thigh? How is there any room to move 3 steps forward in order to displace all of Birna’s attacks AND still have room to lunge
- 2 “As she pushed up on her front” are you raising up as you did before? Are you just on your tippitoes?
- 1 “aim to step quickly to her left with her hind legs” This would put you at a VERY bent angle. Did you font legs shuffle or are they still pointing at Birna?
Total: 5
POWERPLAY
- 2 “to make them worse in a severe bite” You must still write a clear attempt for this
- 2 Nested attack. By “paw slamming” her knee then immediately dropping the paw to paw slam Birna’s, this is assuming the first one hit. BTW Birna hit her shoulder to the knee so it isn’t exactly the same move.
+ 3 bite attempt to rear
+ 1 grip
+ 1 paw stomp
+ 1 paw…slam
+ 2 hip check
Total: 8
INJURIES
- 2 moderate wounds to left thigh
- 1 bruising to left rear leg
- 2 moderate bruising to hock
Total: 5
Total for Round Two: 34 / 50
Totals:
BRINA
50 + 46 = 96 / 100
ARIETTA
34 + 40 = 74 / 100
And the winner is...
BIRNA
ARIETTA must give up by submitting, fleeing or passing out. Birna, your maim is successful and you may find another fight.
Damage:
BRINA
- minor bruising to left knee – 4 OOC days
- moderate lacerations to hip – 2 OOC weeks
ARIETTA
- moderate bruise to left hind leg – 4 OOC days
- mild bruise to left thigh – 2 OOC days
- moderate bruise to left hock – 4 OOC days
- Moderate lacerations to left thigh – 2 OOC weeks
Notes:
Tips for writing and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here):
LUNS
HO’MAN! That’s the highest score I’ve ever given. Great use of the entire body for attacks. Be wary of overwhelming your opponent, however. Creative attacks far outweighs a billion and one attacks in my eyes. <3
Keno
Wow! Dramatic shift from your other fight posts. However, there is a distinct difference between clarity and over explaining. It felt like I was reading a science textbook in places. Over explaining is not good at times because it can be seen as powerplay. Try not to depend on angles only to determine your whereabouts unless you are very clear what direction, where you are in relation to your opponent. Stating you moved at a 45 degree angle could mean you pivoted away from her or into her. Also be clear on if you pivot, turn, or your whole body just sidestepped 30 degrees. Precise, scientific details does not always mean clarity.
