On the seventh day the wolf said...

Quote:Notes - Some things you tried to do were anatomically impossible for wolves, at least from the angle you were in.

Quote:Notes - You should specify your movements a bit more, so we don't have to guess things like which direction you dashed. Typos, run-ons, and pronoun use made it difficult to read.

Quote:Notes - Not much powerplaying in this thread; only in round 2 you assumed how your opponent would let your attack hit.

Quote:Notes - Some of your attacks were a bit illogical, with questionable effectiveness. I gave you some points for creativity, though.

Quote:Notes - You scored low here mostly because you fought aggressively instead of defensively, but also because you rarely planned for balance or the upcoming counterattacks.

Quote:Notes - You took few injuries from your unagressive enemy.

Quote:Notes - Awaken's tactics were very... creative, is one way to put it. You lost a bit of points when it was difficult to tell exactly what you were doing when you weren't specific. Your moves also left Awaken in situations where he could easily be unbalanced and I'm surprised that Cormalin didn't capitalize on one of them. Some better understanding of what wolves are capable of would help your fighting posts, as well as more attention to grammar for clarity.

Quote:Notes - You were good at keeping realistic, only the slightest problems until round 4.

Quote:Notes - For the most part your fight posts were very clear, although in round 4 many details were missing that would help me see just what Cormalin was doing.

Quote:Notes - I didn't notice any signifigant powerplaying from you in this fight.

Quote:Notes - Your attacks were often logical, but as he was somewhat unagressive, he can't get full points here.

Quote:Notes - You defended rather well. Just remember to watch exactly where your opponent's attacks are aimed and think about if your defensive moves are entirely possible.

Quote:Notes - Solid defense absorbed some potential damage.

Quote:Notes - Overall you wrote your fight posts well, although as I've said round 4 was difficult to imagine. His kick was aimed further back where it would be difficult to "duck" under them without going fully prone which would leave you unable to make the quick counter-attack you wrote of. Also, if you were under his kick and pushing up, his thighs would be behind your head where you couldn't get your teeth to so easily. Looking at just the rest of the fight, your defenses were good and your attacks were logical though sparse.

Quote:Winner ? Cormalin

Awaken must either flee, pass out, or submit.