Quarterly Maintenance
01-02-2016, 02:46 AM
(This post was last modified: 01-05-2016, 08:49 AM by Tealah.)
Sorry if some of these seem nitpicky my inner editor went kinda crazy tonight.
Guide Book:
01. Getting started
02. General rules
03. Character creation
04. Packs and Alphas
05. Fighting & Judging
That's as far as I got before bed started calling for me, I will pick this up again at a later point so long as someone else doesn't beat me to it.
Guide Book:
01. Getting started
- "by posting a plot threads" - Unfortunately I don't think something can be both singular and plural at the same time
02. General rules
- "While this mark may be used for thick language" - Never heard it called thick language before, may be a turn of phrase I'm unfamiliar with, if so please disregard (Posting rules)
03. Character creation
- "A lawful good character will do whatever is necessary to ensure that the greater good is benefited." - Just awkward wording here. (Character Alignment- Lawful good)
04. Packs and Alphas
- Current number of packs needs to be updated (8 instead of 6) (Pack Creation and Expansion)
- The Expanded requirements for claiming/Challenging for packs post doesn't have the same font size as the rest of the guidebook.
05. Fighting & Judging
- "So. If my wolf Bob challenges Gary [...]" - I believe the period was supposed to be a colon (Spars, Disputes and Maiming challenges)
That's as far as I got before bed started calling for me, I will pick this up again at a later point so long as someone else doesn't beat me to it.