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01-13-2016, 12:29 AM
 

SIN vs XEPHYRIS for SPAR



ROUND ONE


SIN

CLARITY
- 0
Total: 10

POWERPLAY
- 0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (eyes) + 1 (ears) + 1 (head) + 1 (chin) + 1 (tail) + 1 (knees) + 1 (toes) + 1 (claws) + 1 (jaws) + 1 (scruff)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 3 throat grab
+ 1 grip attempt
+ 1 paw stomp
Total: 5

INJURIES
- Rnd 1
Total: 10

Total for Round One: 45 / 50


XEPHYRIS

CLARITY
- 2 “leave moderate puncture wounds” Sin has your arm in his jaws and you move to the right. Wolves legs don’t have rotating shoulders like humans, they are on a front to back acel. This move should have either minorly fractured your leg or slightly dislocated your shoulder. Please keep realism in mind. :3
Total: 8

POWERPLAY
- 2 ignored paw stomp
Total: 8

DEFENSES
+ 1 (knees) + 1 (claws) + 1 (weight) + 1 (ears) + 1 (hackeles) + 1 (tail) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (muzzle) + 1 (shoulders) + 1 (chin)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 1 paw skim to back
+ 3 Bite to scruff
+ 1 grip attempt
Total: 5

INJURIES
- Rnd 1
Total: 10

Total for Round One: 41 / 50


ROUND TWO


Sin

CLARITY
- 2 “ he sought to surge forward” How? Is he trying to slam into Xeph?
- 2 “Sin’s head tilted upwards” Xeph twisted so he was facing your side and your posts make it seem like they are head on yet you didn’t move. What is their positioning?
Total: 6

POWERPLAY
- 2 Too many moves. You clenched your jaws, released, turned (?), body slamed and throat attempted. By not giving your opponent time to react to your initial jaw attack (clenching) you pretty much force the attack to be successful, which is powerplay.
Total: 8

DEFENSES
+ 1 (ears) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (hackles) + 1 (teeth) + 1 (head) + 1 (chin) + 1 (tail) + 1 (shoulder) + 1 (face) + 1 (neck)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 2 body slam
+ 1 Grip attempt
+ 3 bite
+ 1 severity
+ 1 trip attempt
Total: 8

INJURIES
- 1 light bruising.
Total: 9

Total for Round Two: 41 / 50  

XEPHYRIS

CLARITY
- 0
Total: 10

POWERPLAY
- 0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (ears) + 1 (knees) + 1 (claws) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (muzzle) + 1 (tail)
Total: 5

ATTACK
+ 1 paw to face
+ 2 paw to belly
Total: 3

INJURIES
- 3 moderate lacerations to throat
- 2 moderate lacerations to forepaw
Total: 5

Total for Round Two: 34 / 50


Totals:


SIN
45 + 41 = 86

XEPHYRIS
34 + 41 = 75


And the winner is...

SIN
Xephyris must give up by submitting, fleeing or passing out.




Damage:

SIN
- light bruising, 3 OOC days

XEPHYRIS
- mod lacerations to throat - 2 OOC weeks
- Mod lacerations to forepaw - 1.5 OOC weeks
- Severe lacerations to leg - 2.5 OOC weeks
- Slight dislocation of shoulder - 3 OOC weeks

Notes:

Tips for writing and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here):

BOTH
Congratz on a fantastic fight, guys :3 All my notes are above. If you have any questions, please let me know.


- By [Arin]