The Art of Murder [Cifer]
04-22-2013, 11:47 AM
Challenger ? Cifer
Realism
Quote:-3 most attacks are kept realistic and damage is viable.
Clarity
Quote:-10 I found the posts to be a bit jumpy and hard to configure.
Powerplaying
Quote:-5 lack of use of attempt when moving around Banshee
Attacks
Quote:-2 Most attacks were clean, realistic, and were not powerplayed, however, he did take risks that ended up hurting him more than her at points, for example, the ways he used his shoudlers. You're to brace and press forward versus just ram like Cifer constantly does.
Defenses
Quote:-27 mention of balance, but no specification as to where it is lain, knees, ears, eyes, shoudlers, and various elements throughout the whole fight have to be maintained.
Injuries
Quote:-15 Injuries are substantial, and may hinder you considerably.
Total [38/100]
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Challengee ? Banshee
Realism
Quote:-3 Where cifer bit her lower mandible, the correct motion would have been to remove herself from the position instead of opening herself to damage. Canines often do not live through a broken jaw, and thus, do not allow anything to attack/grasp them.
Clarity
Quote:-15 Often times you do not specify where attacks are aimed and instead leaf it up to cifer to choose. You should be explainin at least a basic segment of the body that she plans to attack not constanty 'attacking some flesh' 'attempting to grasp flesh. etc,
Powerplaying
Quote:-8 constant lack of attempt when moving around Cifer
Attacks
Quote:-4 Attacks were fairly realistic, but your last attack lacked clarity, understanding, and overall realism if Cifer has lifted himself.
Defenses
Quote:-30 no mention of balance throughout the fight, vitals, eyes, ears, etc,
Injuries
Quote:-21 Fair, subtraction due mostly to lacking realism, and reasoning, especially concerning the jaw.
Total~ [19/100]
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Results!
Quote:Winner ? Cifer
Banshee MUST either flee, pass out, or submit.
Cifer-Heavy scarring across shoulder, that will cause pain for 2 OOC weeks, major bruising of the chest, 2 OOC weeks, lacerated tongue that will cause swelling and the inability to eat for 4 OOC days/2 IC weeks.
Banshee-Major scarring across shoulders, crown of the head, and mouth that will cause discomfort/severe ache for 3OOC weeks, piercing, scratching, scarring, and swelling of the tongue that will last 1 OOC week, 3 IC weeks. Banshee's weight will deterioriate substantially and she will not be at full strength for 3 OOC weeks, 7 IC weeks.