- 2 "head long he rushed" What was their positioning? Headlong just meant he ran straight, but were they face to face?
- 2 "Sensitive underbelly, slightly off to Hare's left" Where exactly? Along his ribs? Underbelly is a huge space, please specify.
- 2 " Would swing his right foreleg" Are you trying to grab and pull? Or hit it out or aslap it or buckle the ankle?
Total: 4
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- 2 "would seek to slip underneath" You attempt the attack, yes, but then you immediately assume you got there. Slipping under a wolf is not all that easy, and the way you worded your next attackes paints the picture that you automatically got there.
- 2 "Would push his hind legs (...) to spin his body" How? Are you up on your forelegs, spinning? Are you skidding? Cha Cha Real Smooth? Where do you stop? Perpindicular, yes, but where are the points? Are you facing his side?
- 2 "his jaws would seek the open lacerations" And what? Nibble? Grip? Lick?
Total: 6
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- -2 "Lifting his right foreleg to slam" 'To' is not an attempt. Try again.
- 2 Repeated movements. You said he lunged under Hyp twice, and then sandwhiched an attack Hare did between both. Did he dive after the bite landed, or before and the bite landed while you were lunging?
