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02-29-2016, 07:07 PM
Find #31

VALI vs BASS for DOMINANCE



ROUND ONE


VALI

CLARITY
- 0
Total: 10

POWERPLAY
- 0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (ears) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (tail) + 1 (legs) + 1 (knees) + 1 (toes) + 1 (claws) + 1 (shoulders) +1  (chin) + 1 (hackles)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 2 shoulder throw
+ 3 bite to shoulder
+ 1 grip
Total: 6

INJURIES
- Rnd 1
Total: 10

Total for Round One: 46 / 50


BASS

CLARITY
- 0
Total: 10

POWERPLAY
- 0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (ears) + 1 (chin) + 1 (tail) + 1 (head) + 1 (legs) + 1 (toes) + 1 (claws) + 1 (hackles) + 1 (shoulders) + 1 (eyes)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 2 bear hug
+ 3 bite to neck
+ 1 grip
Total: 6

INJURIES
- Rnd 1
Total: 10

Total for Round One: 46 / 50


ROUND TWO


VALI

CLARITY
- 2 "She lunge at the same time she, hind legs kicking powerfully" Uh, what? The sentance is incomplete, did she lunge as she was shifting her forelegs, or after? You said she ONLY moved her forelegs when she shifted, were these movements combined?
- 2 "She'd attempt to spin" How'd she land? Where's the points? Are you on Bass' left or right side? Or are you facing him?
- 2 "She'd try to sink her teeth in Bass' side" Which side?
Total: 4

POWERPLAY
- 2 Too much movement. Suddenly dodging an attack fully by leaping away, full stop, spinning a full 180 degrees....it is just a lot of movement for one post and for Bass to react too.
Total: 8

DEFENSES
+ 1 (fur) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (ears) + 1 (shoulders) + 1 (chin) + 1 (legs) + 1 (knees) + 1 (tail) + 1 (paws) + 1 (toes)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 3 bite to side
Total: 3

INJURIES
- None
Total: 10

Total for Round Two: 35 / 50

BASS

CLARITY
- 0
Total: 10

POWERPLAY
- 0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (weight) + 1 (toes) + 1 (claws) + 1 (ears) + 1 (head) + 1 (tail) + 1 (chin) + 1 (shoulders) + 1 (hackles) + 1 (ears)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 3 bite to muzzle
+ 1 grip
+ 2 shoulder slam to face
Total: 6

INJURIES
- 2 moderate laceration to right shoulder/side
Total: 8

Total for Round Two: 44 / 50


Totals:


VALI
46 + 35 = 81

BASS
46 + 44 = 90


And the winner is...

BASS
VALI must give up by submitting, fleeing or passing out.




Damage:

VALI
- None

BASS
- Moderate Lacerations to right side behind right shoulder above ribs - 1.5 OOC weeks

Notes:

Tips for writing and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here):

BOTH
My notes are above. If you need any clarification, please let me know. Good fight! Keep up the good work, guys :D

- By [Arin]




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