Semananti
06-13-2013, 11:22 AM
You'll need to add two more sentences to her personality. Also, I'm going to ask that you remove the part about her being born in a wildlife reserve, as that suggests it was something created by humans who do not exist in the world of Alacritis.
You'll be good to go once those are fixed. :)
You'll be good to go once those are fixed. :)