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09-10-2016, 07:04 PM

TINARO vs BASS for RANK CHALLENGE



ROUND ONE


TINARO

CLARITY

-1 which way is he rotating his upper body?
-2 where on the trachea is he trying to strike, from under the jaw down to the chest is a fairly significant are and affects positioning.


Total: 7


POWERPLAY

-3 you need to give your opponent time to respond to your attacks. Generally you can't do more than one attack with the same body part without it being to much movement so the headslam and bite are in conflict.


Total: 7


DEFENSES

+1 for each seen


Total: 10


ATTACK

+2 shoulder to windpipe +1 severity
+1 headslam
+3 bite +1 grip -1 pp issues
+1 paw stomp



Total: 8


INJURIES

- First round


Total: 10




Total for Round One: 42/50



BASS

CLARITY

no issues seen


Total: 10


POWERPLAY

all good


Total: 10


DEFENSES

+1 each seen


Total: 10


ATTACK

+3 bite +1 grip
+1 shoulder throw

Total: 5

INJURIES

-first round
-moderate bruise on right shoulder [1 ooc week to heal]
-moderate bruising to forepaw [1 ooc week to heal]


Total: 10




Total for Round One: 45/50



ROUND TWO


TINARO

CLARITY

-1 "by twisting his upper body and attemptin" how is he twisting?
-2 make sure to specify if Tinaro got his muzzle out of Bass grip


Total: 7


POWERPLAY

none seen


Total: 10


DEFENSES

+1 each seen


Total: 8


ATTACK

+1 shoulder throw (close proximity) +1 attempt at worsening previous damage
+3 bite +1 grip -1 clarity issues


Total: 4


INJURIES

-1 moderate bruising to left shoulder [will take 1 ooc week to heal]
-2 moderate lacerations to muzzle [will take 2 ooc weeks to heal]
-1 moderate bruising to crook where right shoulder meets chest [will take 1 ooc week to heal]


Total: 6




Total for Round Two: 35/50



BASS

CLARITY

all clear


Total: 10


POWERPLAY

none seen


Total: 10


DEFENSES

+1 each seen


Total: 10


ATTACK

+1 right paw slam
+1 left paw slam
+1 for trying to force weight onto opponent
+3 bite +1 grip

Total: 7

INJURIES

-0 mild bruising to left shoulder [3 ooc days to heal]
-2 moderate lacerations to chest [2 ooc weeks to heal]


Total: 8




Total for Round Two: 45/50


Totals:


TINARO
Total = 77/100

BASS
Total = 90/100


And the winner is...


BASS

Tianro must give up by submitting, fleeing or passing out

Damage:

NOTES

see damage notes above, good fight guys and way to go Millie you are really improving!



- By [Lunarcat7]