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*Erebos I* · 04-11-2017, 10:50 PM

Erebos growled when he wasn't able to crush her windpipe, but instead caught the left side of her neck. The first taste of blood on his tongue set all his senses on fire, his form nearly convulsing in excitement. His once narrowed eyes flew open as his tongue ran over her wound, a grumbling moan followed. It had been far too long since he had fed this side of him, and now that he had had a sample there was no stopping him. So focused on the taste of her, she was able to slip past him to aim a bite on his thigh. He hissed as her teeth bit into the flesh right where his leg met his belly, far too close to his goods to be comfortable. Pain laced through him, nearly making him quake. But it also pushed him forward, Lili whispering words of encouragement in his ear. Licking his now bloody lips, he saw his chance when her right hing leg came towards him. Quickly lowering his head, he attempted to bite down hard on the limb that was practically offered to him. He tried to take her leg near the back of his mouth, hoping to crush and hold onto the ankle of her hind left leg. If he was able to do so, he would be able to catch her off balance and hopefully flip her to expose her belly and throat. This movement tucked his chin towards his chest, his shoulders rolling forward as his stance stayed square. Hopefully this would stop any and all movements that the woman wanted to make. [Attempted counter to her dodge and charge attack.]

Erebos' ears were pricked up, not usually seen in a fight. But he was excited, listening to the words that twisted around them. They wanted him to kill her, to gut her and leave her flesh for the crows to eat. A manic laughter left him, his toes spreading as his claws bit into the ground below him. Each limb was placed an equal distance apart, but his weight was shifted over to his left side to keep it off his injured hind leg. This was, in his mind, a battle to the death. A few wounds weren't unheard of, but he would paint the snow with her blood tonight.

EREBOS vs MARA for DOMINANCE
Round 2/2
Height: 35 inches
Build: Medium
Notes: Okay going to do this before I post. First thing I notice is that there is a lot of movement here, you have to remember to give your opponent enough time to react. General rule of thumb I go by is three attacks with their movements in there. I would have stopped at the bite, since the dodge and then charge would be seen as too much movement. Also remember that in fights, you're the one to decide how much damage you take and where. So for Erebos' bite, it's okay that it missed where he was aiming but exactly where did he bite down? Was he able to get the grip that he was attempting to get? How much damage did his bite do? If so, then you wouldn't have been able to move forward since he would then have to let go of her, unless she tore out of his grips to go for his leg. Other then that it was pretty good, nice and clear attack points. <3 If you want to add another round to get in more practice go ahead. Since it's non-judged we're good to do that!

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