-1 I don't see how the shoulder slam could possibly shatter a whole leg
-1 they're the same size and build, I don't think a paw slam would break Rikeros' toes and it certainly would not pin him in place
3/10 for Clarity:
Attacks
-2 where on the joint is he trying to hit and how? This determines the success and logistics of the attack.
-1 which right paw is he trying to slam into Rikeros?
Positioning
-2 at what angle is Enigma charging?
-2 I'm lost how Engima is twisting his head to his left but aiming for the left size of Rik's face. It should be opposite.
Directions
Movements
Damage
7/10 for Attacks:
+2 shoulder slam
+1 paw slam
+3 bite +1 hold
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 for each seen
10/10 for Injuries:
first round
Status
3/12 for Experience:
+2 Novice Fighter
+1 Beginner Intellectual
4/5 for Health:
pack status
unhealed event status
unhealed fight status
ENIGMA’s round one total: 40/62
RIKEROS:
WRITING
8/10 for Power Play:
Attempts
Godmoding
-2 you need to state the outcome of all your opponents attacks. What happened to the paw slam?
If/Than Statements
Excessive Movement
Realism
1/10 for Clarity:
*posts are judged individually so you need to specific what part of your wolf's body they are using to attack and where they are aiming it, even if they're mirroring their opponent.
Attacks
-2 which shoulder is he aiming at Enigma? -2 which shoulder of Enigma's is he trying to hit?
Positioning
-2 where on the right side of Enigma's neck is he aiming for? An attack near the jawlline puts the positioning much different than one towards the shoulders.
Directions
Movements
Damage
-2 how much damage did Enigma's fangs do to Rik's scruff? You must specify the severity of the damage. -1 same for the bruise, you need to state how severe
5/10 for Attacks:
+2 shoulder slam
+3 bite
5/5 for Defenses:
list valid defenses up to five
10/10 for Injuries:
moderate bruising to unspecified shoulder
Status
2/12 for Experience:
+1 Beginning Fighter
+1 Beginning Navigator
4/5 for Health:
pack status
unhealed event status
unhealed fight status
RIKEROS’ round one total: 30/62
ROUND TWO
ENIGMA:
WRITING
10/10 for Power Play:
Attempts
Godmoding
If/Than Statements
Excessive Movement
Realism
8/10 for Clarity:
Attacks
Positioning
Directions
Movements
Damage
-2 how much damage did the bite do to Enigma?
6/10 for Attacks:
+2 double arm wrap
+3 bite +1 maim attempt +1 grip
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 each seen
7/10 for Injuries:
-1 moderate bruising to shoulder
-2 moderate lacerations to lower right of neck
Status
3/12 for Experience:
+2 Novice Fighter
+1 Beginner Intellectual
4/5 for Health:
pack status
unhealed event status
unhealed fight status
ENIGMA’s round two total: 45/62
RIKEROS:
WRITING
8/10 for Power Play:
Attempts
Godmoding
If/Than Statements
Excessive Movement
-2 you have Rik trying to dig his jaws in but also ripping back. You should choose one movement or the other.
Realism
8/10 for Clarity:
Attacks
Positioning
Directions
Movements
Damage
-2 how severe is the damage of the jaw attack to Rik's face? The position is good I just don't know how bad it is.
3/10 for Attacks:
+3 bite
5/5 for Defenses:
list valid defenses up to five
6/10 for Injuries:
-3 severe lacerations to face -1 exacerbated by pulling back while still in a hold
Status
2/12 for Experience:
+1 Beginning Fighter
+1 Beginning Navigator
4/5 for Health:
pack status
unhealed event status
unhealed fight status
RIKEROS’ round two total: 36/62
Totals:
ENIGMA: 95/124 RIKEROS: 66/124
And the winner is...
ENIGMA! RIKEROS must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Engima's maim is successful.
Damage:
ENIGMA:
moderate bruising to shoulder 1 ooc week
imoderate lacerations to lower right of neck 2 ooc weeks
RIKEROS:
moderate bruising to unspecified shoulder 1 ooc week
severe lacerations to face 1 ooc month, will never fully heal and will scar
