-2 make sure your attacks are attempted, this sounds like it already hit "Fern would hit the enemy's flank with Fern's own right shoulder"
Godmoding
If/Than Statements
-2 you need to give your opponent time to respond to attacks. There's no point assuming she'll be able to do her second set of attacks if you don't know that the first set actually worked.
Excessive Movement
Realism
8/10 for Clarity:
Attacks
Positioning
-2 the angle should be more specific, I'm not sure how she's going to cut off Justice by attacking her flank.
-1 "His opponents teeth would snap on air," careful, you don't know that Regulus won't just angle his jaws down, it's up to Bri to decide of Reg's jaws close at all.
If/Than Statements
Excessive Movement
Realism
-2 the testicles are pretty far back, I think its unlikely he could scoot along Reg's underside and nip those off.
-1 Dragon doesn't have the leverage or size to pin any of Regulus' paws.
-2 I'm not sure about Regulus having time for all feet on the ground then launching forward and twisting around before Dragon connects. -2 Not sure how Regulus is doing a headbutt and biting at the same time
Realism
-2 I don't find it believable that Regulus could knock Dragon over with a headbutt especially at such close range.
7/10 for Clarity:
Attacks
Positioning
-2 I'm lost with the positioning in the second paragraph, not sure what you mean with the neck aligned with Dragon's tail but the head and shoulders level with rear.
-1 not quite sure if Regulus is going over or past or sort of both. I would assume over Dragon but the wording is causing me to question what you mean by "seeking to surge past Dragon's left hip"
Directions
Movements
Damage
8/10 for Attacks:
+3 bite +1 maim
+1 paw stomp, no extra point for maim attempt. I don't find it believable that Regulus could fracture Dragon's toes in such close range and so similar in size.
-2 where on Justice muzzle is she trying to bite? side? top? is she trying to clamp Justice's jaw shut? I'm also not sure how she's planning to damage the bone structure.
Positioning
-1 "As the two wolves were making a near 90-degree angle" I'm a bit lost how they're at a 90-degree angle now since Justice was facing sharply in.
-2 Dragon turning to his right to get at Regulus' right side is turning about 270 degrees, that's a far bit of ground to cover and your opponent would likely have time to counter that.
Realism
9/10 for Clarity:
Attacks
-1 I'm a bit lost where Dragon's attack is landing and 'where the flesh is more tender' doesn't help me much in visualizing where the attack is landing.
Positioning
Directions
Movements
Damage
10/10 for Attacks:
+2 shoulder slam
+2 chest slam
+3 bite
+3 jaguar bite +1 grip
5/5 for Defenses:
+s1 each seen
7/10 for Injuries:
-2 moderate lacerations to lower right thigh -1 moderate bruising to right hind toes
TEAM CELESTIAL AVERAGE 94.5/124 TEAM TALIS AVERAGE 90/124
And the winner is...
TEAM CELESTIAL! As the highest scoring wolf on the winning team Justice's maim goes through and Fern's face has been severely scarred. She must exit the fight via fleeing, passing out, etc. None of the other maims go through. Justice, Regulus and Dragon are free to start other fights.
Damage:
Its really late, I need to sleep, I have to be up early so here is the damage chart.
1 ooc week - moderate bruising and mild lacerations
2 ooc weeks - severe bruising and moderate lacerations
3 ooc weeks - severe lacerations
There were no broken bones or injuries requiring specific healing notes in this fight. Notes can be found next to each deduction.
