Kara

(09-05-2017, 11:18 PM)Shrapnel Wrote: Okay so there's a few things wrong with your profile, but once it's fixed it'll be good to go.

- You need to post in Maintenance to request your character's name be Kara if that's the name you want your character to go by.

- If you're going by Briarstrike as your ooc name then you need to change that in your character's profile under the "played by" part as well as in the cbox.

- You still need to change your avatar back to the default or to something that's free to use for the public domain. I would suggest going back to the default until someone can make an avatar for you.

- Since you are a new member you do get to have your collar, but you need to list the collar's description underneath the "New member's only" section of your application. (i.e. large accessory - blue collar around Briar's neck)

- I would add more to her appearance. For example you could add on to what she smells like, her voice sounds like, fur texture, fur length, how much she weighs, ect.

- Slender is not an option for build. Your options are emaciated, light, medium, heavy, and obese.

- You also need to add on more to her personality as it's only at 110 words and 150 is required. Go into detail about her likes and dislikes, what makes her angry, is she loyal, does she make friends easily, is she easy to like? I would google personality traits and see what you can come up with to go into detail that would lengthen her personality.

- Blue fur falls under "abnormal coloring" and is not allowed without a purchase. If you were meaning a natural slate color then you need to change the wording.