-2 Bri gets to decide if the jaguars attack was successful, if you don't have a post to go off of then don't mention it. It messes us up when determining damage and injuries for the next rounds.
If/Than Statements
Excessive Movement
Realism
8/10 for Clarity:
Attacks
Positioning
-1 if he's attacking completely head on how his his shoulder hitting Valor's chest and not Valor's shoulder?
Directions
Movements
-1 I'm lost on the paw wrap movement. His right shoulder his slamming into the left side of Valor's chest but that leg is trying to wrap around Valor's right foreleg?
Damage
8/10 for Attacks:
+2 chest slam
+2 shoulder slam
+2 non-piercing bite +1 grip
+1 paw wrap
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 each seen
10/10 for Injuries:
first round
Status
6/12 for Experience:
+3 Intermediate Fighter
+3 Intermediate Intellectual
4/5 for Health:
pack status
unhealed event status
minor injuries from previous fight
DRAGON’s round one total: 50/62
VALOR:
WRITING
10/10 for Power Play:
Attempts
Godmoding
If/Than Statements
Excessive Movement
Realism
7/10 for Clarity:
Attacks
Positioning
Directions
Movements
Damage
-1 how much damage did the chest slam do? -1 where did the chest slam hit if Valor's right shoulder hit Dragon's? -1 how severe was the damage done by the shoulder slam?
5/10 for Attacks:
+1 paw wrap
+3 bite +1 grip
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 each seen
10/10 for Injuries:
moderate bruising to right shoulder
Status
2/12 for Experience:
+1 beginner fighter
+1 beginner hunter
5/5 for Health:
pack status
unhealed event status
unhealed fight status
VALOR’s round one total: 46/62
ROUND TWO
DRAGON:
WRITING
10/10 for Power Play:
Attempts
Godmoding
If/Than Statements
Excessive Movement
Realism
8/10 for Clarity:
Attacks
-1 where on the muzzle is he aiming to clamp? closer to the face? -1 where on the ribs is the jaguar trying to hit exactly? That's a fair bit of space.
Positioning
Directions
Movements
General
8/10 for Attacks:
+2 leg wraps
+3 bite +1 grip
+2 chest slam from Jaguar
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 each seen
6/10 for Injuries:
-1 moderate bruising to right shoulder
-1 moderate bruising to chest
-2 moderate lacerations to cheek
Status
6/12 for Experience:
+3 Intermediate Fighter
+3 Intermediate Intellectual
4/5 for Health:
pack status
unhealed event status
minor injuries from previous fight
DRAGON’s round two total: 47/62
VALOR:
WRITING
8/10 for Power Play:
Attempts
Godmoding
If/Than Statements
Excessive Movement
-2 really lost on where the bite fits in with Dragon' grabbing his muzzle. You need to give an opponent room to respond to attacks or it will make the whole fight messy.
Realism
8/10 for Clarity:
Attacks
Positioning
-1 I'm not quite sure where he's trying to position his lower jaw
Directions
Movements
-1 I'm not sure what you mean when you say he shifted his weight at an angle
General
6/10 for Attacks:
+3 bite +1 grip
+2 arm wrap
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 each seen
6/10 for Injuries:
-3 severe lacerations to muzzle and underside of jaw
-1 moderate bruising to right ribs
Status
2/12 for Experience:
+1 beginner fighter
+1 beginner hunter
5/5 for Health:
pack status
unhealed event status
unhealed fight status
VALOR’s round two total: 40/62
Totals:
DRAGON: 97/124 VALOR: 86/124
And the winner is...
DRAGON! VALOR must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Dragon's claim is successful and Valor is now a prisoner of Talis. Tea has notified me that players are unable to continue fighting after they are either knocked out or have two victories. As Dragon was not knocked out in the melee and this is his first victory he may be involved in one more fight.
Damage:
DRAGON:
-1 moderate bruising to right shoulder - 1 ooc week
-1 moderate bruising to chest - 1 ooc week
-2 moderate lacerations to cheek - 2 ooc weeks
VALOR:
moderate bruising to right shoulder - 1 ooc week
-3 severe lacerations to muzzle and underside of jaw - 3 ooc weeks
