Attempts
-1 “...charging head-on toward Domari as he attempted...” The 'toward Domari' in this sentence tripped you up here. A different wording would have made this sentence work in your favor.
-1 “As he strode toward his opponent...” Same as above.
9/10 for Clarity:
Attacks
-1 if Ramsey is trying to slam his chest into Domari's shoulder, wouldn't rearing up on his hind legs displace the chest bump?
7/10 for Attacks:
+2 for chest slam
+1 for bear hug
+3 for bite
+1 for maim
5/5 for Defenses:
raised hackles
flattened ears
narrowed eyes
tail level with spine
weight distributed evenly
10/10 for Injuries:
none
Status
2/12 for Experience:
+1 beginner fighter
+1 beginner hunter
5/5 for Health:
pack wolf
unhealed event status - none
unhealed fight status - none
Ramsay’s round one total: 46/62
DOMARI:
WRITING
10/10 for Power Play:
None seen!
10/10 for Clarity:
All clear!
8/10 for Attacks:
+3 for chest slam (+1 for heavier build)
+1 for mid battle cuddle (bear hug)
+3 for bite
+1 for maim
4/5 for Defenses:
legs spaced evenly (point removed after Domari reared up and partially negated this defense)
ears pinned
eyes narrowed
toes splayed
nails dug in
10/10 for Injuries:
Deep lacerations to forehead
Status
3/12 for Experience:
+2 novice fighter
+1 beginner healer
5/5 for Health:
pack wolf
unhealed event status - none
unhealed fight status - none
Domari’s round one total: 50/62
ROUND TWO
RAMSAY:
WRITING
8/10 for Power Play:
Attempts
-1 “...tightening his grip around Domari's neck...” This should have been attempted.
Godmoding
-1 “...but his neck was held up off the ground due to the hold he had around Domari's neck...” You're assuming Ramsay successfully maintained his grip.
9/10 for Clarity:
Attacks
-1 “...strike both hind paws directly into the man's private bits...” Twig or berries?
6/10 for Attacks:
+1 for bear bug
+2 for kick
+3 for bite
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 for knees bent
+1 for wide stance
+1 for raised hackles
+1 for ears flattened
+1 for narrowed eyes
7/10 for Injuries:
-1 severe bruising to sternum
-2 for severe puncture wounds to forehead
Status
2/12 for Experience:
+1 beginner fighter
+1 beginner hunter
5/5 for Health:
pack wolf
unhealed event status - none
unhealed fight status - none
Ramsay’s round two total: 42/62
DOMARI:
WRITING
10/10 for Power Play:
None seen!
9/10 for Clarity:
Attacks
-1 “Dómari knew the location was no good for a hold and so abandoned his original goal of lacerations in favor of trying to counter Ramsay's jaws...” How can he abandon this move if the blow just landed?The wording here is a little confusing.
8/10 for Attacks:
+2 for throat stomp
+3 for bite
+1 for severity
+2 for muffling opponent's movements
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 for bent knees
+1 for tucked tail
+1 for shoulders rolled forward
+1 for raised hackles
+1 for splayed toes
8/10 for Injuries:
-1 for moderate bruising to chest
-1 severe bruising to tail
Status
3/12 for Experience:
+2 novice fighter
+1 beginner healer
5/5 for Health:
pack wolf
unhealed event status - none
unhealed fight status - none
Domari’s round two total: 48/62
ROUND THREE
RAMSAY:
WRITING
6/10 for Power Play:
Godmoding
-2 Ramsay's counter bite and then the subsequent movements of his head didn't give Domari enough time to react. Unfortunately, the caveat about possible damage doesn't fix this problem!
Excessive Movement
-2 for a combination of all the movements made during this round
9/10 for Clarity:
Attacks
-1 “The muscles in his hind legs coiled, then unleashed as he tried to throw his weight forward and upward...” Wouldn't these movements displace his paw stomp?
6/10 for Attacks:
+3 for bite
+1 for paw stomp
+2 for body slam/buck
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 for eyes narrowed
+1 for ears flattened
+1 for tucked tail
+1 for raised hackles
+1 for scruff bunched up
9/10 for Injuries:
-1 for severe bruising to throat
Status
2/12 for Experience:
+1 beginner fighter
+1 beginner hunter
5/5 for Health:
pack wolf
unhealed event status - none
unhealed fight status - none
Ramsay’s round three total: 42/62
DOMARI:
WRITING
10/10 for Power Play:
None seen!
10/10 for Clarity:
All clear!
7/10 for Attacks:
+1 for bear hug
+2 for body slam
+3 for bite
+1 for maim attempt
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 for pinned ears
+1 for raised hackles
+1 for tucked tail
+1 for narrowed eyes
+1 for scrunched neck
7/10 for Injuries:
-1 for light lacerations to tongue
-1 for light welts to left foreleg
-1 for light bruising to chest
Status
3/12 for Experience:
+2 novice fighter
+1 beginner healer
5/5 for Health:
pack wolf
unhealed event status - none
unhealed fight status - none
Domari’s round three total: 47/62
RAMSAY: 130/186 DOMARI: 145/186
And the winner is...
DOMARI! Ramsay must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out and has been kicked out of the raid. Domari was successful in maiming Ramsay.
Damage:
Ramsey:
All bruising will heal in 1 ooc week
All mild lacerations will heal in 2 ooc weeks
The severe puncture wounds to his forehead will take 3 ooc weeks to heal
