Attempts
-1 “She bounded straight toward Regulus' right hind leg...” This should have been attempted.
10/10 for Clarity:
All clear!
7/10 for Attacks:
+3 for bite
+1 for maim attempt
+2 for shoulder throw
+ for leg swipe
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 for lowered head and tail
+1 for shoulders rolled forward
+1 for widened stance
+1 for centered weight
+1 for flattened ears
10/10 for Injuries:
None!
Status
6/12 for Experience:
+3 intermediate fighter
+3 intermediate intellectual
4/5 for Health:
pack wolf
-1 for severe bruising acquired in last fight
Valdis' round one total: 51/62
REGULUS:
WRITING
9/10 for Power Play:
Excessive Movements
-1 From the dodging to the new positioning to the attacks, you had Regulus move around quite a bit in a very short amount of time.
7/10 for Clarity:
Positioning
-3 if Regulus spun on his heels he would be facing Valid's right side, not her left. I'm subtracting 3 for this move because it negatively effects so many aspects of this fight post.
9/10 for Attacks:
+3 for bite
+1 for maim attempt
+2 for chest slam
+2 for shoulder throw
+1 for paw swipe
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 for pinned ears
+1 for narrowed eyes
+1 for bent limbs
+1 for raised hackles
+1 for weight distributed evenly
10/10 for Injuries:
None!
Status
5/12 for Experience:
+4 advanced fighter
+1 beginner intellectual
5/5 for Health:
pack wolf
no unhealed injuries
Regulus' round one total: 50/62
ROUND TWO
VALDIS:
WRITING
10/10 for Power Play:
None seen!
10/10 for Clarity:
All clear!
8/10 for Attacks:
+3 for bite
+1 for severity
+2 for right shoulder throw
+2 for left shoulder throw
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 for flattened ears
+1 for raised hackles
+1 for tucked tail
+1 for spread toes
+1 for nails dug in
9/10 for Injuries:
-1 for light lacerations to face
Status
6/12 for Experience:
+3 intermediate fighter
+3 intermediate intellectual
4/5 for Health:
pack wolf
-1 for severe bruising acquired in last fight
Valdis' round two total: 52/62
REGULUS:
WRITING
10/10 for Power Play:
None seen!
5/10 for Clarity:
Attacks
-1 “He sought to sink his upper canines into the flesh at the left side of her spine, and his lower canines into the flesh of the right side of her spine...” If they are standing left to left then to make this move work, his upper teeth should be aimed at the right side of her tail and his lower teeth should be aimed at the left side.
Damage
-1 “Her teeth tangled in the fluffy hair of his tail...” Where on his tail?
-1 “Her teeth tangled in the fluffy hair of his tail, the front teeth snapping shut on the bone...” What kind of damage did he take from Valdis' bite and how severe is the wound?
-1 “...leaving him with a moderate bruise on the front of his left hind hock.” Valdis had been aiming for his kneecap, so why did her blow land on what google tells me is more or less a wolf's ankle? Because he's dropping his haunches, shouldn't her shoulder have landed higher up?
-1 “However, her left shoulder caught him squarely in the gut, several inches further down than her intended location...” Same as above; shouldn't this blow have landed higher up?
5/10 for Attacks:
+1 for golden shower
+1 for pin attempt
+0 for fart
+3 for bite
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 for tucked tail
+1 for eyes narrowed
+1 for hackles raised
+1 for ears flattened
+1 for weight distributed
3/10 for Injuries:
-2 for severe lacerations to tail (damage assigned by opponent)
-3 for fractured tail (damage assigned by opponent)
-1 for moderate bruising to left hock
-1 for severe bruising to bread basket
Status
5/12 for Experience:
+4 advanced fighter
+1 beginner intellectual
5/5 for Health:
pack wolf
no unhealed injuries
Regulus' round two total: 38/62
ROUND THREE
VALDIS:
WRITING
10/10 for Power Play:
None seen!
8/10 for Clarity:
Directions
-1 “His upper fangs to the left of her spine, his lower fangs to the right...” How did his upper fangs hit her left side and his lower fangs hit her right when they are standing left to left?
Movements
-1 what happened to Regulus' attempt to “sit” on her head? When she backed out from under him did she somehow manage to dodge the attack even though he was already in the process of crouching? Did she have to wiggle herself free? Was there damage?
5/10 for Attacks:
+3 for bite
+1 for severity
+1 for leg swipe
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 for shoulders rolled forward
+1 for widened stance
+1 for weight distributed
+1 for toes spread
+1 for claws dug in
8/10 for Injuries:
-2 for moderate lacerations to lower back
Status
6/12 for Experience:
+3 intermediate fighter
+3 intermediate intellectual
4/5 for Health:
pack wolf
-1 for severe bruising acquired in last fight
Valdis' round three total: 46/62
REGULUS:
WRITING
10/10 for Power Play:
None seen!
8/10 for Clarity:
Attack
-1 There's a 5” height difference to begin with, but in Lunar's previous post she states that Valdis is crouching down. How can Regulus slam his chest into her hip if he is standing and she is not?
-1 Same as above only for his shoulder slam
7/10 for Attacks:
+2 for chest slam
+1 for leg swipe
+3 for bite
+1 for severity
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 for narrowed eyes
+1 for flattened ears
+1 for raised hackles
+1 for straightened tail
+1 for weight distributed
10/10 for Injuries:
None!
Status
5/12 for Experience:
+4 advanced fighter
+1 beginner intellectual
5/5 for Health:
pack wolf
no unhealed injuries
Regulus' round three total: 50/62
Totals:
VALDIS: 149/186 REGULUS: 138/186
And the winner is...
VALDIS! Regulus must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out, and Valdis was successful in her maim attempt.
