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Xane, male, loner



Xander


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02-26-2018, 06:31 PM
(02-26-2018, 06:16 PM)Shrapnel Wrote: Alright, just a couple more things! I would change the word "stripes" that you have in your appearance description, since stripes would need to be bought from the gem store, unless you'd rather change out your new member item for other species markings instead of the companion.

Also I would recommend adding in more color descriptions for your character's appearance, it's very hard to picture what your character looks like. Is it a gray timber wolf?

And your character's size should be large, not dire wolf!

After you fix those things Xander should be good to go.

Oops ill fix it