Soiled Blood - Egyptian Lineage
04-05-2018, 10:17 PM
I am thrilled that you applied, Bear!
There are some things still confusing for me, such as his "Beings war and drama with his soul" and the Multiple Personality Disorder. If you could edit and explain them better I would appreciate it.
Also, regarding Kalores history, I would like you to take a look at Ra's and Nephthys history and blend him into that so I can understand where he comes from.
Unfortunately he cannot be Nephthys brother as Ra only had three offsprings however Kalores can be someone the family adopted (since his personality does not exactly match the bloodline that well)
Let me know!
There are some things still confusing for me, such as his "Beings war and drama with his soul" and the Multiple Personality Disorder. If you could edit and explain them better I would appreciate it.
Also, regarding Kalores history, I would like you to take a look at Ra's and Nephthys history and blend him into that so I can understand where he comes from.
Unfortunately he cannot be Nephthys brother as Ra only had three offsprings however Kalores can be someone the family adopted (since his personality does not exactly match the bloodline that well)
Let me know!