'TIL DEATH DO US PART
07-17-2013, 03:02 PM
JUPITER v KAIOS for DEATH Round 1
Jupiter: 10/ 10 for clarity- a clear post. 10 / 10 for powerplaying. post contained no powerplaying 10 / 10 for defenses.weight even, tail parallel, wrinkled muzzle, eyes narrowed(glare), hind legs pulled back, ears pinned. 4 / 10 for attack.rushed attack at the scarred portion of Kaios's face. 10 / 10 for injuries.No deduction first round Round one Jupiter Total: 44/50 Kaios: 6 / 10 for clarity-surging forward, did he take a step? (You wrote in your summary that he used his back legs, but not in your post.) (also in your summary you say he stepped with his right leg, in your post it seems he lifted it to throw her off kilter and never put it down)If he turns his head left and she's on his left side attacking his left, that would angle him away from her throat. Which side of her neck did he aim for? 10 / 10 for powerplaying. Post contained no power playing. 9 / 10 for defenses. eyes narrowed, head lowered(though he's so much bigger and with their positioning, I don't feel like this one would do much), ears pinned, muscles stiffened, tail level with spine. 6 / 10 for attack. pushing against Jupiter, biting at her neck/throat area. 10 / 10 for injuries.No deduction first round Round one Kaios Total: 41/50 Round 2
Jupiter: 8 / 10 for clarity- how did she turn while she was latched onto him? Which shoulder/side of her neck did he bite? 10 / 10 for powerplaying. post contained no powerplaying. 8 / 10 for defenses.lips curled, ears pinned, snarls hiding companion movement, body repositioned for balance 6 / 10 for attack.attemtping to worsen Kaios's injuries to his face, Mercury attacking Kaios's back left leg 9 / 10 for injuries. fur ripped above shoulder Round two Jupiter Total: 41/50 Kaios: 9 / 10 for clarity-Jupiter's movement is what caused Kaios's attack to rip fur from her shoulder, if she moved it would be wrong to say he was only a couple of inches from the same spot. 9 / 10 for powerplaying.it would be nearly impossible for him to hear so much from Mercury with Jupiter snarling and all of the wolves around them. 8 / 10 for defenses.ears pinned, tail tucked, jaws splayed, balance on front legs (his eyes being slitted is only mentioned in your summary) 6 / 10 for attack.attack to Jupiter's shoulder with his teeth, kick to Mercury with his back left leg 8 / 10 for injuries.bleeding wounds on his face Round two Kaios Total: 40/50 Round 3
Jupiter: 7 / 10 for clarity-You never state where her front paws are placed, although it's somewhat apparent they're aimed to be around his neck to try and pull him down? 10 / 10 for powerplaying. post contained no powerplaying. 8 / 10 for defenses. hind claws dug into ground, ears pinned, eyes narrowed, jaws parted 8 / 10 for attack. further tearing at Kaios's face, trying to pull Kaios downward, Mercury attacked Kaios's left leg 7 / 10 for injuries.fur and flesh torn from her right shoulder Round three Jupiter Total: 40/50 Kaios: 9 / 10 for clarity- minor grammar and spelling issues. 8 / 10 for powerplaying. Jupiter has been attacking and putting pressure on the same spot for three rounds, there is no way major damage wouldn't have been done. Not even scar tissue is that thick. 8 / 10 for defenses.Tail level with spine, ears pinned back, eyes slitted, claws digging into the ground 6 / 10 for attack.jaws aimed at Jupiter's neck/ shoulder / throat, left leg attempting to hook Jupiter and pull her down 4 / 10 for injuries.Ripped tendon resulting in his back left leg rendered useless, further injury to his face Round three Kaios Total: 35 / 50 Round 4
Jupiter: 10 / 10 for clarity- a clear post 10 / 10 for powerplaying.post contained no powerplaying 10 / 10 for defenses.ears pinned, head pulled back, tail level with spine, narrowed eyes, body behind her and positioned away from Kaios 6 / 10 for attack.aiming to bite kaios's throat, and pushing her right paw into his neck 7 / 10 for injuries.bite to the side of her neck Round four Jupiter Total: 43/50 Kaios: 10 / 10 for clarity- a clear post 8 / 10 for powerplaying. that left paw moved a bit quickly, especially with his balance already completely placed on his right side. he succeeded in hooking it around her, i don't see how he could fit it between them before/while Jup attacked. 10 / 10 for defenses. chin tucked, ears pinned, shoulders scrunched, tail tucked, neck bunched 6 / 10 for attack. bite to Jupiter's neck, paw aimed at her throat 7 / 10 for injuries.bite to the side of his neck Round four Kaios Total:: 41 / 50 Round 5
Jupiter: 10 / 10 for clarity- post contained no powerplaying 10 / 10 for powerplaying. post contained no powerplaying 10 / 10 for defenses. ears pinned, eyes narrowed, tail out for balance, weight positioned to front and on her toes, shoulders forward 6 / 10 for attack.attack to kaios's neck, attempting to press his head down with her leg 6 / 10 for injuries.bite to the left side of her neck, worsened by Kaios's thrashing Round five Jupiter Total: 42/50 Kaios: 9 / 10 for clarity-it is somewhat unclear whether his paw is being used to pull him up or being placed on the ground to push him up by the end of the post. 9 / 10 for powerplaying. Wolf claws can not rip flesh. 10 / 10 for defenses. shoulders scrunched, head tilted (protecting throat), ears pinned, eyes narrowed, jaws open 5 / 10 for attack. bite aimed at Jupiter's spine, claw scratching down Jupiter's shoulder 7 / 10 for injuries.grip to the left side of his neck Round five Kaios total: 40 / 50 Totals:
JUPITER: (210)217/250 + 7 for task (avenger) KAIOS: (197)202/200 + 5 for task (slayer) And the winner is...
JUPITER! As the winner she may deal the killing blow to Kaios. Damage:
JUPITER: Jupiter will retain permanent scarring to the left side of her neck. Injuries will take 2ooc weeks to heal (approximately 6IC weeks) - By [Serendipity]
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