Desperation[MATURE]
07-20-2013, 11:03 AM
GERHARDT v ADETTE for Mating Rights Round 1
GERHARDT: 10 / 10 for clarity- a clear post. 10 / 10 for powerplaying. post contained no powerplaying. 10 / 10 for defenses. head alighed with spine, ears pinned, legs bent for balance, tail positioned for balance, eyes narrowed, jaws splayed 5 / 10 for attack. One attack to Adette's chest with his jaws, swiping at her right front paw. 10 / 10 for injuries.First round Round one GERHARDT Total: 45/50 ADETTE: 10 / 10 for clarity- Notes 8 / 10 for powerplaying. The counter itself is a good one that is used somewhat often. But Gerhardt was not aiming anywhere near Adette's face, but her shoulder. 10 / 10 for defenses. head level with body, chin tucked, shoulders rolled, balanced on back paw, ears pinned, eyes narrowed 4 / 10 for attack. One attack to Gerhardt's jaws with her own. 10 / 10 for injuries.First round Round one ADETTE Total: 42/50 Round 2
GERHARDT: 9 / 10 for clarity- minor defenses and some explaination of his attack is left out of the post itself, make sure your summary directly reflects your actual post. 10 / 10 for powerplaying. post contained no powerplaying. 10 / 10 for defenses. eyes narrowed, head and neck aligned with spine, shoulders rolled, tail raised for balance, legs bent for balance 6 / 10 for attack. one attack to Adette's front left leg, attempting to strike Adette's right shoulder with his left 9 / 10 for injuries. soreness in teeth from collision Round two GERHARDT Total: 44/50 ADETTE: 9 / 10 for clarity- a relatively clear post. some movements were hard to follow. 8 / 10 for powerplaying. she didn't seem to push herself up onto her hind legs, but sort of floated into the position(minor deduction) which would have been made even harder later on in the post while Gerhardt has a grip on her front left leg. 10 / 10 for defenses. weight repositioned for balance, tail out for balance, ears pinned, chin tucked, shoulders rolled 6 / 10 for attack. One attack to Gerhardt's spine with her jaws, right paw positioned to hook around Gerhardt's neck or push against his shoulder 7 / 10 for injuries. Grip attained to Adette's front left leg, half an inch deep. Round two ADETTE Total: 40/50 Round 3
GERHARDT: 10 / 10 for clarity- a clear post. 6 / 10 for powerplaying. Adette was never said to have put her feet back on the ground. If Gerhardt is lowering his head enough to avoid her attack (and his eagle) this wouldn't be possible place to aim for while she's reared on her hind legs. 10 / 10 for defenses. ears tucked, lips curled, jaws splayed, feet on the ground for balance, neck tucked down, eyes narrowed 6 / 10 for attack. Jaws aimed for Adette's front left limb, companion attacking Adette's face 10 / 10 for injuries. No injuries taken Round three GERHARDT Total: 42/50 ADETTE: 10 / 10 for clarity- A clear post. 10 / 10 for powerplaying. post contained no (unapproved) powerplaying. 10 / 10 for defenses. ears pinned, eyes narrowed, shoulders scrunched, chin tipped, tail dropped for balance 4 / 10 for attack. one bite to Gerhardt's neck 6 / 10 for injuries. Major injury to left leg, minor injury to left shoulder, damage to scruff from Robin's talons Round three ADETTE Total: 40/50 Totals:
GERHARDT: 131/150 ADETTE: 122/150 And the winner is...
GERHARDT! Adette must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
GERHARDT- Scarring to back of neck / scruff. will take one ooc week to heal. ADETTE- wounded possibly fractured left leg, will take two ooc weeks to heal. Notes:
This was a great fight, you both did extremely well! Aislyn, I would work on some of the detailing to your movements. Andy be careful of your assumptions when it comes to your opponent's movements. But overall this was a good read and you both should be proud. - By [Serendipity]
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