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07-22-2013, 11:04 AM

Gael v Azalea for Practice



Round 1
Gael:

10 for clarity- Very easy to read

10 for powerplaying. ---

8 for defenses. claws dug in, chin tilted, ears flat, eyes narrowed, tail streamline

4 for attack. running straight toward her in attempt to knock her over

10 for injuries.First round

Round one Gael Total: 43/50


Azalea:

10 for clarity-

10 for powerplaying.

0 for defenses. No defenses mentioned except for tucking her leg momentarily

6 for attack. leaping straight up and out of his way, while trying to kick him with her back limb. I?m not certain she could have jumped high enough straight up (with no running start), given that he is taller than her, to completely clear him as she intends to do.

10 for injuries. First round

Round one Azalea Total: 36/50

Round 2

Gael:

10 for clarity- Notes

7 for powerplaying. ?bumping Azalea?s abdomen with his head? you have to say attempt to keep from powerplaying like this.

10 for defenses. Ears pinned, eyes narrowed (closed momentarily, then reopened) head tucked, tail tucked

3 for attack. Hoping to knock her off course with a head bump to the abdomen

8 for injuries. Minor, but present.

Round two Gael Total: 38/50


Azalea:

10 for clarity- Notes

10 for powerplaying. Notes

4 for defenses. head tucked, ears folded, jaws parted,

6 for attack. attempting to throw herself into him while biting at his leg

6 for injuries. Bruised and possibly sprained shoulder

Round two Azalea Total: 36/50



Totals:


Gael: 81/100

Azalea: 72/100



And the winner is...


Gael! Azalea must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out.

Damage:


Gael- Scratches to his face will take 3 OOC days to heal, while a few may permanently scar.


Azalea- Sprained shoulder will take 1 OOC week to heal, and will impede motion during that week.


Notes:



Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here)
Good fight, ya?ll!

For trynx
Your biggest downfall during this fight was that you lacked basic defenses in each post. I think you were assuming them, but not writing them down. Overall it was a good fight, but in the future try to remember to set your defenses each time you post.

For wolfeyez
You fought very well. I would recommend watching your wording, because you had a minor powerplaying issue.



- By [Andy]