A step in the right direction

Loviat suddenly felt like her heart was pounding against her chest. A male who was the alpha of this pack she assumed that she practically had been trying to see what happened on the inside. She didn't know if it was fate, or if it was just because it was the first pack she had come across in these lands. Though she smiled, clearing her throat and trying to speak clearly. "My name is Loviat. I've come to your pack in the hopes of offering my hunting and navigation skills as a member." this was how it went right?

She'd never willfully joined a pack before. She certainly hoped that didn't show. The scared female even tried not to hold eye contact. Whenever she felt like she was being too disrespectful her eyes would dart to one side. Lowering her head slightly to show her submissive nature.