Eclipse - aw
09-14-2013, 08:52 PM
(This post was last modified: 09-14-2013, 09:04 PM by Isardis.)
CANTTINA vs RENESME for Practise Round 1
CANTTINA: 8/ 10 for clarity- more detail could be given in regards to your attack, eg. What angle does she approach, exactly what injury does she hope to inflict? 10 / 10 for powerplaying. post contained no powerplaying. 8/ 10 for defenses. flat ears, narrowed eyes, tail tucked, sturdy limbs, gripping toes, bared teeth, hackles raised. 6/ 10 for attack. A false attack left, then darting right to attack the left shoulder whilst attempting to falter her balance. 10 / 10 for injuries.First round Round one CANTTINA Total: 42/50 RENESME: 10 / 10 for clarity- Clear post. 10 / 10 for powerplaying. No power playing. 0/ 10 for defenses. Unfortunately no defences were mentioned in your post. Simply listing them in the summary does not count, they must be included in the round post itself. 6/ 10 for attack. Grasp to the scruff, then attempting to break opponents toes via the force of her paw. 10 / 10 for injuries.First round ? wound to left shoulder. Round one RENESME Total: 36/50 Round 2
CANTTINA: 9/ 10 for clarity- More clear, but what is Canttina aiming to achieve with her bite? 10 / 10 for powerplaying. post contained no powerplaying. 7/ 10 for defenses. flat ears, narrowed eyes, tail tucked, sturdy limbs, bared teeth, hackles raised. 5 / 10 for attack. Single bite attack to the right shoulder. 5/ 10 for injuries. Broken toe in left foot, scruff wound (?), bruised chest. Round two CANTTINA Total: 36/50 RENESME: 10/ 10 for clarity- Clear post. 10/ 10 for powerplaying. No Powerplay 4/ 10 for defenses. Balanced weight, tucked tail, gripping paws. 7/ 10 for attack. Attempting to worsen damage to scruff, then making an attack to opponents left hind thigh. She also attempts to swipe Canttina?s chest, however wolf paws do not do much damage so this is virtually disregarded. 6 / 10 for injuries. Chest bruising, right shoulder wound Round two RENESME Total: 37/50 Round 3
CANTTINA: 9/ 10 for clarity- Again, what do you hope to achieve with your attacks? 10 / 10 for powerplaying. post contained no powerplaying. 5/ 10 for defenses. 5/ 10 for attack. Bite to the right hind thigh, scrape to the rump. Attacks with wolf claws are very weak. 4 / 10 for injuries.Serious bite wound to left hind thigh. Round three CANTTINA Total: 33/50 RENESME: 10 / 10 for clarity- Clear post. 10/ 10 for powerplaying. Post contained no powerplaying. 0/ 10 for defenses. No defences mentioned. 4/ 10 for attack. Attack to the right hind, aiming to dislocate? I don?t think there was enough force for this to be likely. 8 / 10 for injuries.Renesme dodged. I?m not a fan of dodging, but it wasn?t exactly unrealistic so I?ll let her have it; however, I will deduct two points for the two wounded shoulders, as it would have been painful for her to move this fast. Round three RENESME Total: 32/50 And the winner is...
CANTTINA! (scoring 111) Renesme (Scoring 105) must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
CANTTINA- Broken toe, serious wound to the thigh will be slow healing and potentially scar. RENESME- Slow healing shoulder injuries may scar or be prone to infection without treatment. Notes:
Good job guys! Tyr you?d do so much better if you incorporated defences into your posts. That was what let you down. Canttina, watch your clarity. When planning an attack you should also consider hat damage your wolf hopes to inflict. - By [Y u m p y]
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