as we collide
09-16-2013, 07:44 PM
WE HAVE BEGUN A RE-JUDGING PROCESS DUE TO THE ONE POINT DIFFERENCE IN THIS JUDGING. PLEASE HOLD OFF FOR THE FINAL VERDICT.
WE HAVE BEGUN A RE-JUDGING PROCESS DUE TO THE ONE POINT DIFFERENCE IN THIS JUDGING. PLEASE HOLD OFF FOR THE FINAL VERDICT.
GIDEON v ARGENT for GIDEON & ABORTION/CASTRATION Round 1
GIDEON: 10 for clarity- wonderful 10 for powerplaying. nothing of note 9 for defenses. ears against his head, tail out, eyes narrowed, head lowered, shoulders rolled, weight evenly distributed, bent knees, jaws open. Defenses were great, but he is at a bit of a disadvantage when he goes on three legs. 8 for attack. attempting a grab at her left shoulder, left shoulder attempting to slam into the center of her chest, left paw seeking her right knee. Not sure how his shoulder slam is going to be as effective with his left paw being raised to swat at her knee. 10 for injuries.First round Round one GIDEON Total: 47/50 ARGENT: 10 for clarity- n/a 10 for powerplaying. I?m just making a note here, as you didn?t technically powerplay. Please be aware that stating things about the other character as you did frequently in this post can sometimes be mistaken as powerplaying. I read it carefully and realized that you werne?t powerplaying, but just be careful in the future. Generally people don?t like things being stated as fact about what their character is or isn?t doing. 9 for defenses. legs spread, weight distributed, legs bent, toes spread, tail tucked, hackles raised, shoulders rolled, head lowered, chin tucked, neck scrunched, jaws parted, eyes narrowed, ears pinned. Wonderful defenses, one point off for raising a paw and thereby mildly compromising balance. 10 for attack. right shoulder into gideon?s far right chest, slamming her paw down on his toes trying to break them, seeking to bite Gideon?s neck bone. 10 for injuries.First round Round one ARGENT Total: 49/50 Round 2
GIDEON: 10 for clarity- Notes 9 for powerplaying. When did Argent pull away from him and rip out his fur? 9 for defenses. head tucked, jaws open, limbs bent and distributed, tail out, eyes narrowed, ears back, claws out, still on three legs for part of the post. 9 for attack. Driving his right shoulder into the base of her neck, center of her chest. Teeth aiming for her right shoulder (previously injured). Entire bodice moving forward to force his weight into her. Should he not be favoring his injured paw? 5 for injuries. Two fractured bones in his left paw, four 1/8 inch cuts, moderate fur loss. Round two GIDEON Total: 42/50 ARGENT: 10 for clarity- Notes 10 for powerplaying. Notes 9 for defenses. three grounded limbs, body bent, weight distributed, toes spread, claws out, shoulders rolled, head lowered, neck scrunched, hackles raised, chin tucked, jaws parted, ears pinned, eyes narrowed. Docked for one raised limb. 7 for attack. slamming her shoulder into his ribs, ankle bending down and moving upwards at the underside of his chest. I am confused as to how her ankle is supposed to crush his ribs? Perhaps you meant to mention her shoulder in here too? 6 for injuries. Moderate bruising on her right shoulder, lacerations on her right shoulder. The injures are adding up on this shoulder. Round two ARGENT Total: 42/50 Round 3
GIDEON: 10 for clarity- Notes 9 for powerplaying. Her fangs didn?t bite at his face? 7 for defenses. shoulders rolled, neck coiled, chin tucked, jaws open, eyes narrowed, ears pinned, tail out, weight balanced, legs bent, paws gripping. Good compensation for the injured toes. Took both paws off of the ground for an attack. 10 for attack. Sacrificing balance to make a powerful attempt at bashing her right shoulder while biting at her jawbone, weight attempting to force down on her, injured left limb seeking her left eye 6 for injuries. Long gashes on muzzle Round three GIDEON Total: 42/50 ARGENT: 10 for clarity- Notes 10 for powerplaying. Notes 7 for defenses. tail tucked, legs spread, limbs bent, center of gravity low, weight distributed on three limbs, toes spread, claws curved, shoulders rolled, head lowered, neck scrunched, chin tucked, jaws parted, eyes narrowed, ears pinned. Docked for limb still in the air. Rising up on two legs. 8 for attack. Going for his spine while casting her weight into his back 4 for injuries. Moderate bruising on her right injured shoulder, inch long lacerations on the outside of her jaw. She?s got to be really hurting in this shoulder now. Round three ARGENT Total: 39/50 Totals:
GIDEON: 131/150 ARGENT: 130/150 And the winner is...
GIDEON! ARGENT must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
GIDEON- Most serious damage done to his two fractured toes, which will take two OOC weeks to heal and will possibly cause a mild limp. ARGENT- Most serious damage done to mobility of her right front shoulder, which will take two OOC weeks to heal and will possibly make mobility difficult. There was nothing substantial to suggest an abortion or castration could have taken place, therefore neither of them occurred during the battle or will occur post-battle. Gideon has won his freedom, and Argent may not challenge for it again during this thread or in the immediate future. Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) You guys did really well. Try to avoid stating facts about the other character (even though you weren?t technically powerplaying). This was a REALLY close fight and I?m super stressed about it but I hope I did it justice. Wonderful job ladies <3 - By [Andy]
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