as we collide
09-16-2013, 10:56 PM
DIS BE A RE-JUDGING VERDICT, YO.
Gideon vs. Argent Round 1
Gideon: CLARITY: 8 / 10 I'm a bit skeptical of having Gideon hold on to Argent's left shoulder and then also using his own left shoulder to bump her chest. The positioning is weird. POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No powerplaying found. DEFENSES: 8 / 10 Pinned ears, balanced tail/stance, protected throat, ready stance, open jaws. ATTACK: 8 / 10 Multiple move attack. Bite to shoulder, slam into chest, paw to Argent's limb. Minus points for weird positioning. INJURIES: 10 / 10 First round. No injuries. Round one Gideon Total: 44 / 50 Argent: CLARITY: 10 / 10 Your post was clear. POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No powerplaying found. DEFENSES: 10 / 10 Balanced stance, ready stance, tucked tail, protected throat, narrowed eyes, pinned ears, jaws parted, toes spread. ATTACK: 10 / 10 Multiple move attack. Meets Gideon's attack by charging, attempts to break toes, attacks neck aiming for bone. INJURIES: 8/ 10 Deep bite wound to shoulder. Round one Argent Total: 48 / 50 Round 2
Gideon: CLARITY: 7 / 10 There were a ton of issues with your post. Confusion with what shoulder Gideon attacked "Teeth would again attempt to snap into the shoulder he had attacked before (her right)" in the last round he had bitten her left shoulder? The statement regarding what shoulder he was using to bump Argent with was confusing "His right shoulder would then attempt to take his right shoulder", left toes that were crushed yet not on the ground? And then lowered to the ground? POWERPLAYING: 8 / 10 Argent did not mention releasing Gideon. DEFENSES: 10 / 10 Protected neck, open jaws, ready stance, balanced stance/tail, pinned ears, narrowed eyes, spread toes. ATTACK: 6 / 10 Two move attack. Bumps into chest, pushing forward and bites at right shoulder. INJURIES: 7 / 10 Fractured toes. Minor bite wound to neck. Round two Gideon Total: 38 / 50 Argent: CLARITY: 10 / 10 Your post was clear. POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No powerplaying found. DEFENSES: 10 / 10 Tucked tail, balanced stance, ready stance, spread toes, protected throat, jaws parted, face bunched, ears pinned, eyes narrowed. ATTACK: 8 / 10 Multiple move attack. Slams shoulder into ribs, ankle against chest, bites at ribcage. INJURIES: 8/ 10 Bruised shoulder. Light lacerations to right shoulder. Round two Argent Total: 46 / 50 Round 3
Gideon: CLARITY: 7 / 10 Argent didn't try to bite Gideon's face. POWERPLAYING: 6 / 10 Again, Argent didn't try to bite Gideon's face. You also completely disregard Argent's attack to his ribcage. DEFENSES: 9 / 10 Protected throat, jaws open, narrowed eyes, pinned ears, balanced tail/stance, ready stance, spread toes but some damaged. ATTACK: 7 / 10 Multi-move attack. Bites at jaw bone, attempts to push body down on Argent aiming limbs at her left eye. (Even though this isn't the eye facing him?) INJURIES: 8 / 10 Imagined gashes on muzzle? Round three Gideon Total: 37 / 50 Argent: CLARITY: 10 / 10 Your post was clear. POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No powerplaying found. DEFENSES: 10 / 10 Tucked tail, balanced stance, ready stance, toes spread, protected throat, jaws parted, eyes narrowed, ears pinned. ATTACK: 7 / 10 Multiple move attack. Pulls away, raises on front limbs and attempts to push down on center of Gideon's back, also attempts to bite his spine. INJURIES: 7/ 10 Worsened bruising to right shoulder, lacerations to right jaw. Round three Argent Total: 44 / 50 Totals:
Gideon: 119 /200 Argent: 138 /200 And the winner is...
Argent! Gideon must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
Gideon- most serious damage done to his two fractured toes, which will take two ooc weeks to heal and will possibly cause a mild limp. Player2- most serious damage done to mobility of her right front shoulder, which will take two ooc weeks to heal and will possibly make mobility difficult. Notes:
I would say that you both did really well listing your defenses and planning intricate and effective attacks. Lu, you would have scored much higher if there hadn't been so many problems with clarity which in result caused me to deduct points from you for powerplaying. I also think it would have helped make your posts more clear if you had listed your attacks, defenses, etc at the end of your post as is the fashion on Alacritis. This fight would have been close without the problems with confusion.- Vivien |
DIS BE A RE-JUDGING VERDICT, YO.