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08-17-2013, 09:07 PM
Killian vs Alena Round 1
Killian: CLARITY: 10 / 10 Your post was clear. POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No powerplaying found. DEFENSES: 2 / 10 You list specific defenses in your ooc comments but not in your post. To get credit for defenses you need to include them in your post, not just summarize with "settled into defensive position." ATTACK: 0 / 10 First Round. You should have started counting rounds after Alena's attack. If you're giving her the first move the rounds need to be counting starting with her. INJURIES: 10 / 10 None. First Round. Round One Killian Total: 32 / 50 Alena: CLARITY: 10 / 10 Your post was clear. POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No powerplaying found. DEFENSES: 7 / 10 Full points for pinned ears, tucked chin, balanced stance/tail, anchored claws. ATTACK: 4 / 10 Full points for an efficient attack INJURIES: 10/ 10 None. First Round. Round One Alena Total: 41 / 50 Round 2
Killian: CLARITY: 10 / 10 Your post was clear. POWERPLAYING: 8 / 10 You weren't explicit about the damage inflicted by Alena's attack. DEFENSES: 3 / 10 Full points for your counter. Again you list no defenses in your actual post. ATTACK: 4 / 10 Full points for an efficient attack. INJURIES: 8 / 10 Bite wound on hind leg. Round Two Killian Total: 33 / 50 Alena: CLARITY: 10 / 10 Your post was clear. POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No powerplaying found. DEFENSES: 8 / 10 Full points for balanced stance, anchored claws, pinned ears, slit eyes, tucked chin, scrunched neck. ATTACK: 4 / 10 Full points for an efficient attack INJURIES: 9/ 10 Bruised Side. Round Two Alena Total: 41 / 50 Round 3
Killian: CLARITY: 10 / 10 Your post was clear. POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No Powerplaying. DEFENSES: 6 / 10 Full points for your counter, balanced stance/tail/head and anchored toes. ATTACK: 8 / 10 Full points for an two part attack. INJURIES: 7 / 10 Scratch on hip. Twisted Ankle. Round Three Killian Total: 37 / 50 Alena: CLARITY: 9 / 10 Some typos. POWERPLAYING: 6 / 10 Points taken off for edit. DEFENSES: 8 / 10 Full points for balanced stance/tail, pinned ears, slit eyes, scrunched neck, body curled. ATTACK: 8 / 10 Full points for a two part attack. INJURIES: 6/ 10 Additional brusing. Bite on scruff. Round Three Alena Total: 37 / 50 Round 4
Killian: CLARITY: 10 / 10 Your post was clear. POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No Powerplaying. DEFENSES: 6 / 10 Full points for protected forelimb/stomach and counter. Again some defenses listed in ooc were not listed in post. ATTACK: 8 / 10 Full points for an two part attack. INJURIES: 8 / 10 Bite on forelimb. Round Four Killian Total: 42 / 50 Alena: CLARITY: 10 / 10 Your post was clear. POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No Powerplaying. DEFENSES: 5 / 10 Full points for pinned ears, slit eyes, curled body and tucked hindleg. ATTACK: 2 / 10 Full points for continuous attack. INJURIES: 8/ 10 Bite on hind leg. Round Three Alena Total: 35 / 50 Totals:
Killian: 144 /200 Alena: 154 /200 And the winner is...
Alena! Killian must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
Killian- Spar. No permanent maims obtained. Alena- Spar. No permanent maims obtained. Notes:
You both did pretty well. For both of you I would reccomend working on more complex attacks and straying from the counter, re-collect and attack pattern. For Raii I think you should work on adding your defenses into your actual points. You would have earned more points if your defenses had actually been in your post. For Alena you're doing pretty well. Just plan more complex attacks and avoid editing posts after they've been made. Just so both of you are aware. If you're giving an opponent the first move the round couting should begin with the person making the first attack. |
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