SEVEN NATION ARMY
10-28-2013, 08:56 PM
BRONZE, MIDNIGHT vs. LOVA for SIEGE Round 1
BRONZE: 8 for clarity. What angle did he approach Lova? 10 for powerplaying. nothing of note 5 for defenses. 4 for attack. A realistic, single attack to the scruff. 10 for injuries.First round. Round one BRONZE Total: 37/50 LOVA: 7 for clarity. Where did Bronze?s attack land? I don?t think she could have hit his armit from their current angle either. 10 for powerplaying. None noted. 5 for defenses. 5 for attack. Shoulder press to throat (not very strong or realistic), attempted snap at his armpit. 10 for injuries.Shallow skin cuts and hairloss to the scruff. First round. Round one LOVA Total: 37/50 Round 2
BRONZE: 9 for clarity. 4 for powerplaying. ?But he pushed his body into hers?, ?Biting down tightly, he would push further into her shoulder.? 2 for defenses. 4 for attack. Single bite to the ribs. 7 for injuries. Bruising to throat/neck, bite wound to side. Round two BRONZE Total: 26/50 LOVA: 6 for clarity- No specifics listed in regards to where attacks are landing and aimed etc. 10 for powerplaying. 5 for defenses. 5 for attack. Worsening damage to side, bite at ribcage. 7 for injuries.Bite wound to ribs. Round two LOVA Total: 33/50 Round 3
BRONZE: 8 for clarity- Nothing messy, just not very much detail to get a good idea of the going-ons. 10 for powerplaying. 3 for defenses. 3 for attack. Worsening damage to ribcage bite. 7 for injuries. Deepened wound on ribs/side. Round three BRONZE Total: 31/50 LOVA: 7 for clarity- Where was her flesh tearing? Where did she aim to bite on her side? 10 for powerplaying. None noted 5 for defenses. 3 for attack. Attempting bite blindly at Midnights side. 7 for injuries.Bite wound behind the skull. Round three LOVA Total: 32/50 MIDNIGHT: 8 for clarity- what angle did she approach? 6 for powerplaying. ?so when she reached the dame?, ?swinging her body so it lay along side the dames facing the same direction as the girl?. 6 for defenses. 4 for attack. Bite towards the nape behind the skull. 10 for injuries. None. Round three MIDNIGHT Total: 34/50 Totals:
BRONZE: 94/150 (divided by 3) = 31.3 LOVA: 102/150 (divided by 3) = 34 MIDNIGHT: 34/50 And the winner is...
MIDNIGHT & LOVA! Bronze is now knocked out of The Siege. Because this is a draw, Midnight and Lova may choose to continue their fight for ONE more round. The winner of this round will determine who is the final victor. The posting order being: Midnight, Lova. Midnight has two days to make her response, or the challenge will default in Lova's favour. Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Good fight! Nyx I suggest watching your PP and add in more defenses. Seimei, you would score really well if you could also add a couple more defences in and incorporate more complex attacks. - By [YUMPY]
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