SEVEN NATION ARMY
10-31-2013, 05:49 PM
satis v cormalin for knockout Round One
satis ? clarity ? 8 out of 10 ; it should be specified which shoulder of satis? was aimed to hit cormalin?s. powerplay ? 10 out of 10 ; nothing of note. defense ? 10 out of 10 ; spine aligned, tail tucked, tensed abdomen, hackles raised, eyes narrowed, ears pinned, toes splayed, balanced, chin tucked, shoulders rolled, body lowered, claws gripping soil, jaws gaping. attack ? 7 out of 10 ; aiming to hit her shoulder against his to throw his balance (+3), attack to cormalin?s elbow (+3), potential yanking motion with her jaws (+1) injuries ? 10 out of 10 ; first round. round one satis total ? 45 out of 50 cormalin ? clarity ? 5 out of 10 ; ?He retaliated then, meeting her shoulder with his own?? it should be clarified which shoulder cormalin is using. ?Her teeth tore a good chunk of flesh from his side?? what is a ?good? chunk of flesh to me may be different for you, so the severity/depth of his wound should be specified exactly, as well as the side that is injured. ??aiming to bite down on her hind leg?? which hind leg is he aiming for? powerplay ? 7 out of 10 ; ??meeting her shoulder with his own as powerful hindquarters drove him into the lunge.? although this is a counterattack to satis? shoulder shove, this still needs to be made as an attempt to slam his shoulder into her own. defense ? 10 out of 10 ; claws gripping soil, tail aligned with spine, toes splayed, squared stance, balanced, ears pinned, eyes narrowed, teeth bared, hackles raised, rolled shoulders. attack ? 6 out of 10 ; aiming to hit his shoulder against hers to throw her balance (+3), bite to hind limb (+2), potential yanking motion with his jaws (+1) injuries ? 10 out of 10 ; first round, chunk missing from side. round one cormalin total ? 38 out of 50 Round Two
satis ? clarity ? 6 out of 10 ; ??rudely re-calculated by a sharp and painful blow to her flank.? the severity/depth of those wounds needs to be specified. it was also difficult for me to imagine how satis would first try to smash her pelvis against cormalin without having her whole body pivot away from him, so the clear-shot at his abdomen was more improbable to me, especially if she?s moving forward to get beneath him. powerplay ? 8 out of 10 ; there was no reason given as to why cormalin?s attack missed its intended target. defense ? 10 out of 10 ; squared stance, weight evenly distributed, spine aligned, tail tucked, tensed abdomen, elbows bent/body lowered, toes splayed, claws digging into soil, shoulders rolled, chin tucked, hackles raised, ears pinned, eyes narrowed. attack ? 6 out of 10 ; attempt to worsen the damage to cormalin?s wounds (+1), attempt to hit her pelvis against cormalins face, points not awarded in full due to the unlikeliness of her hitting his face with her pelvis while he grasps her flank since wolves aren?t that flexible (+1), attack to bite corm?s lower abdomen (+4) injuries ? 8 out of 10 ; wound to flank. round one satis total ? 38 out of 50 cormalin ? clarity ? 5 out of 10 ; ??his charge aiming for her haunches with a dropped shoulder?? which haunch is being targeted with which shoulder? ??striving sharply for a bite to her right hind leg?? her right hind leg is completely on the other side of cormalin, so it was hard to imagine a clear shot at it when satis is so much smaller than corm. powerplay ? 5 out of 10 ; cormalin completely dodged satis? attack to cormalin?s lower abdomen. all attacks made by the opposing side need to be accounted for. defense ? 8 out of 10 ; neck scrunched, ears pinned, teeth bared, hackles raised, shoulders rolled, tail tucked, limbs squared, balanced. attack ? 7 out of 10 ; attempt to worsen damage to already-wounded area (+1), aiming to hit his shoulder against her haunches (+3), bite to her right hind limb, aiming for achilles' tendon (+3). injuries ? 6 out of 10 ; fractured rib, bruising to face round two cormalin total ? 31 out of 50 Totals
satis ? 83 out of 100 cormalin ? 69 out of 100 And the winner is...
satis! cormalin must give up by either submitting, passing out, or fleeing, and may no longer participate in this siege.Damage
satis - moderate wound to flank (will take four ooc days to heal)cormalin ? fractured rib (will take 18 ooc days to heal and breathing will be complicated), deep gashes above fractured rib (will take one ooc week to heal completely) Notes
yumpy ? make sure you specify your attacks and injuries as well as consider the probability of certain attacks' success, keeping in mind that wolves are not very flexible with their movements. excellent defenses and complex attacks.briena ? make sure to specify your attacks and injuries as well, and always acknowledge every attack thrown at your characters, even if they miss. you, too, had excellent defenses and fairly complex attacks. great job to the both of you! c: |
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