-1 "aiming to make sure to meet her head on and keep her from just side stepping her". You can attempt to stay head on but there's no way to make sure you will always be facing your opponent head on regardless of their movements.
-1 the size difference is so great she would not realistically be able to fracture her opponents leg
8/10 for Clarity:
-1 what part of her body is she aiming to hit Widow with?
-1 where on widow's leg is she hoping to connect her body slam?
1/10 for Attacks:
+1 body slam against drastically larger opponent
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 for each seen
10/10 for Injuries:
first round
Status
6/12 for Experience:
+5 Expert Fighter
+1 Beginner Hunter
4/5 for Health:
Loner
BELLATRIX’s round one total: 40/62
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WIDOW:
WRITING
9/10 for Power Play:
-1 make sure to indicate at the start of the fight post or the initial challenge post before if a companion is riding on them. It says the cat took turns between riding and walking but I don't know where it is when she initiates the fight.
6/10 for Clarity:
-1 where on Widow's leg did Bella connect?
-1 what part of Bella hit Widow? If your opponent fails to note you decide (within reason of course)
-2 make sure to indicate the kind of damage your companions are trying to do. For example are the ravens seeking just cutting flesh or a hold?
9/10 for Attacks:
+2 paw stomp with severity
+2 Widows cat claw scratch
+2 bite
+1 companion cat scratch
+1 raven claw attack
+1 raven claw attack
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 for each seen
10/10 for Injuries:
first round
Status
12/12 for Experience:
+6 Master Fighter
+6 Master Intellectual
4/5 for Health:
Loner
WIDOW’s round one total: 55/62
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ROUND TWO
BELLATRIX:
WRITING
8/10 for Power Play:
-2 weapons can't be used in tier 1 fights
2/10 for Clarity:
-1 how did Bellatrix move to offset Widow's jaws?
-1 what damage does Widow's jaw attack do?
-1 where on Widow's body is she trying to slam her shoulders into?
-1 it is up to you to determine the damage your character takes from an opponents attack. What damage do the claws do?
-1what damage does the cats claws do?
-2 what damage do the ravens do
-1 what were the results of Widow's paw stomp?
4/10 for Attacks:
+2 double shoulder slam
+0 dagger attack, no points given for weapon usage
+2 horn attack from reindeer
4/5 for Defenses:
+1 for each seen
5/10 for Injuries:
-1 scruff puncture wounds
-2 scratch wounds from Widow and cat
-2 scratch wounds from ravens
Status
6/12 for Experience:
+5 Expert Fighter
+1 Beginner Hunter
4/5 for Health:
Loner
BELLATRIX’s round two total: 33/62
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WIDOW:
WRITING
6/10 for Power Play:
-3 each companion can only do one attack per fight
-1 make sure to have the cat attempt to hang on
8/10 for Clarity:
-2 where on the reindeer's face are the raven's aiming for?
2/10 for Attacks:
+2 bite worsening
+0 companion attacks (companion's already used their allotted attacks)
5/5 for Defenses:
+1 for each seen
8/10 for Injuries:
-2 moderate lacerations to face
Status
12/12 for Experience:
+6 Master Fighter
+6 Master Intellectual
4/5 for Health:
Loner
WIDOW’s round two total: 45/62
Totals:
BELLATRIX: 73/124 WIDOW: 100/124
And the winner is...
WIDOW! BELLATRIX must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out.
Notes:
Widow, good work on using the companions to boost your first round fight score. I had just had a couple notes you can read above including that companions only get 1 attack per fight rather than round.
Bellatrix, you can read my notes above. The main thing would be weapons and armor are not allowed in tier 1 fights. Also make sure to state where your character takes damage and how much. The experience deficit also played a part as you started with a -12 point deficit. So just something to keep in mind!