Got my bad baby by my heavenly side [SPAR]
12-24-2013, 02:55 AM
Soldier vs. Dodge Round 1
Soldier:CLARITY: 9 / 10 Not sure how he was pushing her chest with his right paw when he was coming at her with her on his left? POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No powerplaying found. DEFENSES: 4 / 10 Pinned ears, narrowed eyes, tail tucked, muscles tensed, moving on his toes, shoulders back ATTACK: 3 / 10 Leaping to her right side, aiming to bite her shoulder, pushing on her chest with his paw to help knock her over. INJURIES: 10 / 10 First round. No injuries. Round one Soldier Total: 36 / 50 Dodge: CLARITY: 9 / 10 Would have liked a little more detail on her attacks. How did her paw do anything to his shoulder? From what angle? Ect. POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No powerplaying found. DEFENSES: 3 / 10 Paws spread for balance, haunches raised, tail tucked, ears pinned back ATTACK: 3 / 10 Rearing back and hitting his shoulder with her paw to try and knock him off balance, biting at his spine INJURIES: 10 / 10 Slight bruising to her chest Round one Dodge Total: 35 / 50 Round 2
Soldier: CLARITY: 9 / 10 Not clear on how he was hitting her with his paws when he was biting her shoulder? POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No powerplaying found. DEFENSES: 1 / 10 Low stance for balance. You have to list your defenses in your post every time for them to count. ATTACK: 2 / 10 Reaching for a bite on her shoulder, hitting her in the chest with his paws to knock her over. (Lowered score for basically repeating the same attack.) INJURIES: 7 / 10 Bite near his spine, tearing from jerking away from her bite Round two Soldier Total: 29 / 50 Dodge: CLARITY: 5 / 10 More details needed. How did she dodge the bite? How is she going in to bite him? Ect. Also, don?t understand how she would bite his throat and put a paw on his face and shoulder. POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No power playing found. DEFENSES: 4 / 10 Lowered stance for balance, ears pinned back, tail tucked, hackles raised, muscles tensed ATTACK: 3 / 10 Bite at his throat, pushing him down with a paw to the face and shoulder INJURIES: 9/ 10 More chest bruising Round two Dodge Total: 31 / 50 Round 3
Soldier: CLARITY: 5 / 10 Details please. How did he dodge? Where is he leaping? Ect. Also, how is he hitting her chest, biting her shoulder and pressing a paw onto her neck? POWERPLAYING: 7 / 10 You?re allowed one full dodge a fight, and you had some kind of major dodge every round. DEFENSES: 5 / 10 Ears pinned back, tucked tail, crouched, haunches raised, eyes narrowed, shoulders back ATTACK: 2 / 10 Biting her shoulder, pressing a paw onto the back of her neck, and hitting her chest with his paw. Took points for yet again doing the same attack. INJURIES: 8 / 10 Bruising on the shoulder Round three Soldier Total: 27 / 50 Dodge: CLARITY: 8 / 10 Again, details. POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10 No power playing found. DEFENSES: 4 / 10 Tail tucked, ears pinned back, hackles raised, muscles tensed, stance lowered ATTACK: 3 / 10 Biting at his spine, pushing him with a paw INJURIES: 7 / 10 Bite to the shoulder Round three Dodge Total: 32 / 50 Totals:
Soldier: 92 /150 Dodge: 98 /150 And the winner is...
Dodge! Soldier must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
Soldier - Bite wound on the left side near the spine, bruising on the shoulder Dodge- Bite wound on the shoulder, bruising on the chest Notes:
Both of you should read the notes I left for you in the actual judging very closely. Make sure you list everything you do in your posts. Details are key. Also, keep in mind that fight posts are generally very long. Can?t wait too see you two fight again and see your improvements <3- Shelbs |
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